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June-In-Spoon
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June-In-Spoon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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June-In-Spoon ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have tasted this June-in-spoon Palette whet with wet Saline memories found the rain and they cry me yet~ Borrow of sorrow cupped in sips of used-to-know Porcelain heart cannot contain the seeping overflow~ Stir of bitter-sweet surrounds me blend of past in broken cup Oh, the memories have found me now they fill me up~ Tasting now of June-in-spoon saucer sips delicately drawn I would not miss the spill-of-remember sweeter still ... though you are gone~ ~Yeah ... I know ... but it has to be~ Mike, Mother, and Shari June 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your poem leaves me breathless, Marge... I love the way you elevated a simple object to such exalted heights.  ~ June hugsLyra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You and Helen have the same kind of thoughts ... just different spooning  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Lovely post. I love your analogies. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A hauntingly beautiful memory of some sadness in your life. They always hurt, but we all have a need to remember! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is so beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge...this is beautiful...and "I would not miss the spill-of-remember" is a line not to be forgotten soon by this reader. Hugs ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautiful! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Borrow of sorrow cupped in sips of used to know This is wonderful! Great write, as usual, Marge! ~Sydney McLean |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well done a very pleasing read.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestFriends~ Thank you ... some days just dawn darker than others ... bringing some memories that need to be caressed~ Lyra~ I so appreciate your kindness of thought~ InterLoper~ Thanks for the read dear sir~ KrisHankins~ Thanks so much ... welcome to Passions~ BettyLou~ You know the need of remember holds me gently in recall of things that need to be touched~ Thank you my friend~ SweetSue~ Thank you dear ... *hugs* Enchantress~ I appreciate knowing that something I've written would stay with you ... thank you lady~ BSquirrel~ Thanks fella~ Sydney~ Thanks for liking what I've penned~ Seymour~ I really appreciate your comments, my friend~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
"Stir of bitter-sweet surrounds me blend of past in broken cup Oh, the memories have found me now they fill me up~" I truly love this stanza especially, how apt and heartfelt. Sometimes it's so important for us to acquire that taste of bitter-sweet to truly appreciate the meaning of life, of love. *hugs* ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I should pick a favorite part From this lovely "pour of heart" I would repeat your every letter... For it doesn't get much better. *S* This is beautiful, Marge... {{{{{HUGS}}}}} for you as you allow remembering to bring both smiles and sorrow. *S* |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl this is an incredible poem from you, the memories bitter sweet are made so much sweeter by the way you express them. Your writing is always a real of inspire, this is simply one of your best and I love it Krissy   And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (06-28-2002 12:21 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyCafe~ I so appreciate your thoughts~ Love is sweet ... and leaves behind such tender memories to be sipped~ SweetestSuthernFriend~ I just *hug* you to pieces~  I CAN wait ... but I really don't wanna~ I'm SO happy that some September evening will drop you in my *hug*~:loveya" Krissy~ Sweetie ... thank you always for the love that flows from your heart~ I cherish you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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