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Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2002-06-26 02:31 AM

My big picture
just fell from the wall,
sending the old pain
screaming
in echoed shatters,
furious, desperate,
and dire.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-26 02:53 AM

I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS.

I always say, if y'wanna hang a big picture, THE FIRST THING that y'do? Is? FIND A STUD...

and? yer adorable...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-06-26 05:36 PM

paint another picture, Love.

Don't change this poem though. Its perfect.
Misting ya!

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-26 07:15 PM

(sigh) WOW!!! Oh Philip, this one gave me goosbumps because if I accidentley let a piece of art fall, I too would feel very bad and nervous even if it was an accident! (sigh) This is very emotionally strong, sweet friend, I just love how you make such few words so striking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Philip, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-26 07:18 PM

LOL@serenity's reply!
Excellent Philip!
You know how I love these 20 or less!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-06-27 06:23 AM

hmm...back to the top with ya..

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-06-27 06:54 AM

Forgot to add, nice touch!

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2002-06-27 07:57 AM

Interesting...though I thought this was gonna be about Balladeer's rear end and figured it wouldda been "censored" by a moderator or something.....

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-06-27 09:41 PM

Feeling the pain here. Well done.
Sandra

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2002-07-23 09:05 PM

Phillip,
this left the reader reeling from bewilderment and a sense of loss...think this is what you set out to achieve..well done...

i'm curious though..why would the author want to hang up the picture if it reminds him of his pain?

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