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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-07-23 02:20 PM



Tour de France

A Texan is riding on wheels of a dream
That skim over asphalt and small mountain stream
The sure and the steady, the force from within
Rides into the tunnel and into the wind

It’s mind over muscle and strength over thrill
That spins silver spokes over crest of a hill
Disease is forgotten, the illness is dead
But the will to defeat it still spins in his head

He is master of miles, a blur to the eye
A bullet that’s launched from the will to defy
The position of others, the measure they lack
Hits nerves in his spine and the skin on his back

No need for the eyes to now venture behind
For completing the mission’s consuming the mind
As the rock of Gibraltar stands firm in it’s place
So the look of conviction's engraved on his face

The course of resistance is etched under scalps
That brazenly challenge the might of the Alps
Only one will be titled the winner by name
Only one is bestowed cyclers' honor of fame

Just one streak of lightening will flash on that day
A yellow shirt piercing the Champs Elysees

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (07-23-2002 02:20 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-23 02:20 PM


This is a very good write.

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2 posted 2002-07-23 02:35 PM


Tour de force!

It's always my pleasure to read you Liz!

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3 posted 2002-07-23 02:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, yay, go Lance Armstrong!!! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful perspective on the race, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-23 04:59 PM


Lizzie..as usual, nice write....you behave while I'm gone ya hear??...take care of yourself
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5 posted 2002-07-23 05:50 PM



He IS an inspiration to us all...so is Toe, but he won't be back for awhile to see this, so I don't have to worry about him getting a swollen ego....

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2002-07-23 09:36 PM


Thank you all for your kimd comments. Where are you going to TOe? Come back soon!.
Liz

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