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darkling
Member

since 2001-08-28

Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2002-06-25 09:22 PM

My hair is honey,
falling from the spoon
in deep golden layers.

My shoulders are a
broad and sturdy bridge
between my arms.

My soul is a sprinkler,
turned on high, filling
the air with
droplets of happiness.

My toes are a group
of close friends,
all huddled together.

My eyes are windows
to my soul, and
I want you to look.

its amazing what one single word can do.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-06-25 09:42 PM

(smiles) And your eyes and the windows of your heart shine with so much beauty and poetic wonder always, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, may love always look through the beauty of your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annika, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

2 posted 2002-06-25 09:45 PM

Very nice

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-06-25 09:46 PM

If this describes you......you are truly beautiful

Much love, and welcome to Passions

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

4 posted 2002-06-26 03:38 PM

Mmm Mmm. Is it yummy? This is me, feeding you.

I did search the archives, and I think of all your posts, I like this one the best. Eyes are windows, true, very true. ^5

~Sydney McLean

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2002-06-26 03:45 PM

Your Toes?...does this mean you and I are buddies?....(You do realize this means I can just look up and see up your skirt don't ya?...).....Toe

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-26 03:45 PM

Love this...sure do!!
~hugs~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-06-26 03:46 PM

darkling

In a way we do look into the soul when we read another's poetry. Enjoyed this!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-06-26 03:56 PM

Yr quickly becoming a new favorite. The words are vulnerable, yet strong.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

9 posted 2002-06-26 09:36 PM

"My soul is a sprinkler,
turned on high, filling
the air with
droplets of happiness."

...and the soul makes you whole! I enjoyed reading this

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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