Open Poetry #21 |
Fools Gold |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
A shoebox, old and tattered Love letters in tri-fold If dreams were judged in karat weight I'd have a kingdom's gold [This message has been edited by Krishankins (06-25-2002 09:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always cherish all these sweet letters and find pure gold of love in your loves heart forever! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
If dreams were judged in gold cascade I'd pocket more day by day... Just couldn't resist... Found a quote for you.. "To be simple is to be great" -Ralph Waldo Emerson Take care!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
another amazing write from you! I have an old shoebox filled with love letters from ex boyfriends, they are fun to read every now and then when im bored. lol |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Indeed, the weight of your words are folded just right! You carry them well Kris! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If we could but judge by weight of word you'd feel the nudge of verses heard... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is fantastic!!! And you have something much more precious than gold...you have everlasting words of love and memories! Well done! I love the images and the sentiment. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Kris, your work sure is golden Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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