Open Poetry #21 |
Looking for the Rainbow Bridge |
Daylily Junior Member
since 2002-06-10
Posts 22USA |
I’m looking for the Rainbow Bridge, Do you know the way? If only I could find it, I’d go and spend the day. I’d find my friend, young again, Her spirit now set free, I’d throw her ball, she’d track it down, And bring it back to me. We’d walk along a shaded stream, She’d chase a cat or two, Then I’d take her picture To bring back home to you. You’d see her little pointed ears, Her dark eyes filled with light. Her tail would stand straight as a stick, Her coat would be snow white. I’d be happy for the Rainbow Bridge Though it took her far away, I’d ever hold close to my heart, Memories of that day. I’m looking for the Rainbow Bridge I wish I knew the way. I’d cross right over and call her name, And then I’d spend the day. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
2 thumbs up. Enjoyed very much Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Daylily, I absolutely adore this poem. I have a dog that is very special to me but alas he is not my own. I will be visiting him this next week and I am very happy to be able to play with him again. I know someday you too will be able to meet with your dear friend under the Rainbow Bridge. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy it here as much as we will enjoy having you. Please check your e-mail for a special welcome. Dawn |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Daylily A wonderful write and I certainly enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful written first post. welcome to passions, your gonna love it here. *s* I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! What a lovely entrance you have made here! I look forward to seeing more of your writing. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi,you sure touched my heart with this. I have a kitty gone to rainbow bridge for almost 4 years, and I know just what you feel. Very nice poem, welcome! Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! A spirit like this will fly around here! Karilea |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
What a beautiful entrance! I'm looking forward to your next. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
welcome to passions. you'll fit in just fine round here. you paint your imagination well. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always treasured the promise of the rainbow bridge and enjoyed your poem very much. *S* Welcome! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very, very nicely done....An enjoyable read...Welcome to Passions...Hope you enjoy it here beside us... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoy |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Welcome to passions! This is an excellent write If you find that bridge let me know! Hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
this is just so lovely! truly enjoyed! mycafe |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passions! |
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J New Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 9UK |
how very touching.... this is amazing, I dont think it needs any re-ajustment or anything... thankyou, it's beautiful J xxx |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely story, Welcome to Passions. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I just teared right up.... I have many a friend that waits for me on the Rainbow Bridge.... Heaven just wouldn't be complete without all of our loved ones. We will see them all again and cross together into glory. I just loved this piece. Welcome to Passions. I am looking forward to seeing more of you here in our home of blue. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-12-2002 11:02 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully impressional and surreal debut filled with color, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! HAPPY FATHERS DAY!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Egan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Egan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a lovely poem, Daylily... Does your dog chase chipmunks too? If so, I guess I'd better run. Welcome to passions and I hope to read more of your work. ~ welcoming hugs Lyra |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
I simply love this, almost as much as "Rainbow Bridge" itself. ~Sydney McLean |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Pam, You're a hit. This is great! My dog is 14 now. I'm expecting her to be called to Rainbow Bridge and don't look forward to that day. But what a nice memory. Well done. Hope you post often! I'm liking this. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Glad Larry brought this one back up front. I loved the tenderness of this. There is a real Rainbow Bridge, in a park in southern California. The kids love it, and so do the adults. And though I haven't been there in 7 years, I believe it must still a place of great joy. Though this isn't the bridge of your poem, the name itself conjures up many happy memories. Thank you for that. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
let me know when you find it, I'm looking too |
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