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Trace Me... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Trace the line of me onto your heart’s canvas. Indelibly in your pen’s ink as a sculptor would finest stone. Make it straight. For straight to your heart, your soul, your mind I will walk, unwavering. Trace the wave of me into the waters violet and blue. Surf the crest of me on passion's foam. Walk the sands of me as I tickle your toes, find those places only you go. Cover your lines with mine. Let them intertwine, become one and be the edges in trace of our rainbow. Before you ride the line of my crest once more. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fine images here, Magnus... very fine lines, indeed... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Amazing. It caresses my mind. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Barry sweets...you KNOW I loved this right??? you've now got me thinking- *tracing paper* may be sexy...  This was a literary beaut my dear!!! Take care you!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Magnus hi there when you write sighs cupid looks to see how its done. This is a beauty you really draw the most perfect pictures of poetic heart in love and hearts ink. This of course is no exception. I love it I really do   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! I loved the images you painted! IWIHWT [This message has been edited by Interloper (06-25-2002 04:04 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, it's in the 90's here today and the air condioning isn't working properly ...so may I just say.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, such sweet sensuality fill these words and breaches these pages like the waves of the beach! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, This is a keepr, good job. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh this is better than ever,you must stop outdoing youself! Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Delicately lovely lines of poetic thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
adding a sigh to the above. *sigh* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy your writing is always something incredibly special, this is stunning utterly utterly stunning. The softest caress the gentlest touch of sweetest love, all these are conveyed by your beauteous words. NO ONE writes these softly tender pieces so well. No one crafts a sigh with the degree of skill you do. I feel as if I stepped into an enchanted forest and a unicorn has breathed magic into my soul. This is really gorgeous, I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mmm.......soft......lovely........ Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
You are dynamic! Your words always move me. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ahh, Sir Galahad, how you do have a way with words! ThisDiamond |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*fanning self* whew, it's hot in here! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Cover your lines with mine. Let them intertwine, become one and be the edges in trace of our rainbow. Fiery as hot pepper and sweet as sugar, all rolled up into one delicous romantic poem. ~ ummmmm hugs!Lyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Okay, I'm glad we're not in the same room, I'd be nigh on to helpless to succumb to your wiles. You had me completely at the first stanza...but that wasn't enough for you, was it. You had to keep on and melt me clean into my chair, here. When I've a bit more house cleaning to do to get it to my 'barely acceptable' level. sigh  :mmmmgood:Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry! Look what you've done to all these passionate woman! Me too...wink! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm did i say mmmmmmmmm???? i meant MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is why poets get the girls, I guess. Sigh. Quite, quite lovely. Nan |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH MY..... I never, in my wildest imagined dreams thought this poem... THIS POEM... Would carry the impact that it did...All of you have turned a very trying day for me ... into a very elating experience.... I apologize for lack of posts today....It has been a very emotionally trying day... And some of my issues are still burning fairly hot right now... Thank you, greatly...each of you... for your exceptional remarks to this little flower that I have given....to all of you... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yummy! Cor |
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