Open Poetry #21 |
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Feelings... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali ![]() |
Feelingsā¦ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Mine were photos black and white Made of dreams in dead of night ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Mine were folds of paperweight Made of yearning in consummate ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Mine were tantrums of unhappy craft Made in pitiful lacking aftermath ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Mine were lonely bidden substitute Made of handsome deigned constitute ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Mine are freelance dancing in tune Made with love from me to you ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I enjoyed reading about your feelings ![]() Very well expressed, indeed. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
This is a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing your Feelings. Very well written. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
devina~Very very nicely penned indeed! Enjoyed so very much today. Love the way you express yourself. ~hugs~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved this expression of the many parts of you. Well done Devina. Like a red brick, |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I've always enjoyed your poetry, this is no exception. ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"whoa, whoa, whoa Feelings. . . " Sven apologizes for the cheesy lyrics. . . ![]() really though, I liked this. . . I'm wondering what mine would be. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Interloper-expression huh?? least I'm not screamin this time!!! ![]() EarthenSoul- glad you enjoyed...you are very welcome!! Enchantress- then we have the same opinion of each other, no?? ty sweet lady Gentle Spirit- many parts indeed..ty Nicole- always you have been gracious in your comments...I thank you for that sweets!! Sven- oohh...singin to me now huh? *must hear the long version to decide* ty my dear friend...would be curious as to yours..ahem..feelings... ![]() Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
This is soo sweet Lady... love your expression!!! |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I wish I could express my feelings so eloquently. Dawn |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) YAY!!! Oh Tanya, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too smile every time I look at a picture of the girl Joanna I love or even imagine me with her! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Devina, each and every bit of this, really,...I'll read this again. Enjoyed the way you posted it too, very nice. *Peace. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Devina, enjoyed this...very nice how you put each feeling within it's very own stanza. Nicely done. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for your fine words to all of us - great poetry - Paul |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah, so this is what I miss when I'm not online for a while. Glad t' be back to read this! She said burn ... together. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
just beautiful..its wonderful to see you here so much now. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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