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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-06-25 02:40 AM

In silence now
not alone
content
yet impassioned
you are everywhere
literally
from words on a page
comes the day
I’m still shaking my head

I see your face
all I can do
is smile

I recall your lips
every other moment
fades

I hear your voice
a thousand
songs play

I smoke another cigarette
as the coaster
tops this hill

holding on
to this day
when every dream
I ventured
came true
in one embrace

holding on
as you sleep
as I write
I love you

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

1 posted 2002-06-25 02:57 AM

Duncan--You are the soul of romance. Love it!

Shenachie

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

2 posted 2002-06-25 05:51 AM

oh Duncan, such wonderful words from such a wonderful person. Those are words that all people want to hear. That was so moving. It brought a tear to my eyes.

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-06-25 06:14 AM

absolutley wonderful the words and their intend Duncan. So very well done and such a lovely read this a.m. Hugs to you.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-06-25 07:20 AM

you are everywhere
literally
from words on a page
comes the day
I'm still shaking my head

I see your face
all I can do
is smile

I recall your lips
every other moment
fades

===================
holding on
to this day
when every dream
I ventured
came true
in one embrace

holding on
as you sleep
as I write
I love you
===================

why do I get the feeling Duncan is gonna be walking around with that silly grin on his face for weeks.

(the moth is smiling with you)
Oh look...theres Duncan on the porch ... with a smile on his face and his heart on his sleeve...it looks good on him

mothyme

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-06-25 08:07 AM

From a chance meeting through words on a page
Finally together for one perfect day

Well, it mighta took eight months, but darlin it was worth the wait

(those first two lines were gonna be a poem...but I had to go start the mg...it's a gorgeous day here...and now it's time for work!! Might finish it before you get up though...heck, I could probably write a novel before your butt sees the light of day today!!! lmao)

Everything is possible in the game of life
(Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2002-06-25 08:47 AM

aw....AW.....

*sniff*

THIS IS WONDERFUL!!!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-06-25 08:51 AM

...Wondeful...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2002-06-25 09:18 AM

Beautiful!!!

Charisma

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-06-25 09:40 AM

If this means what I think it means..YAY!
Hell of a poem, my friend. Happiness oozes all over it.
Sandra

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2002-06-25 09:42 AM

Awww! This is such a sweet love poem.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-06-25 08:16 PM

(smiles) Oh Duncan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic and I know with all my heart your love will always be writing love you and goodnight to you forever too! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-06-25 09:19 PM

Enjoyed the ride, Duncan...so glad you can appreciate life's ups and downs...

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

13 posted 2002-06-25 09:47 PM

This is beautiful. I can't help but smile.

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

14 posted 2002-06-25 10:21 PM

Very romantic, Duncan....but put out that cigarette for good!

~ non-smoker hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

15 posted 2002-06-25 10:30 PM

I love this, I love this, I love this !!

~mycafe

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