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Hallucination
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0 posted 2002-06-24 09:15 PM


I hope you guys know what I'm talking about, else this is a wierd read. lol...

"Fruit"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

In my hand I've got this sweet looking peach
And I'm gonna take a big bite
Then gently dip it in gin 'N' tonic
Keep it socking wet for the ride
After that I would let my fingers stroll
High and low, in every corner
Do you know why it's such a tasty peach?
One hundred procent foreigner...

In my bag there's a beautiful Orange
That I just can not wait to peal
And piece after piece I will strip it down
Gently split it without a squil
Then I will nip a little in the meat
To get the sweet tasting juice out
Do you know why that's my kinda Orange?
'Cause it tastes so good in my mouth

There's Fruit, fruit, fruit, fruit, everywhere
Don't know if it's healthy, to be exposed to so much fruit.
Well what the heck who the hell cares?
I'm gonna eat while I still have my youth
There's fruit, fruit, fruit, fruit, all the time
It feels like I'm in paradise....

On the tree there's a fine looking apple
I'm just waiting for it to fall
And when it does I'll be there to catch it
I hope that I don't sound to bold
But without the right color, size and taste
Then It's just another apple
I really hope it will make me feel home
Lets stop I'm beginning to babble...

Damn, I love fruit.....

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (06-24-2002 09:17 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-24 09:26 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! I love fruit too, my favorites are coconut, pineapple, and strawberries and cream! (sigh) This is a tasty and cute poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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state of determination
2 posted 2002-06-25 12:26 PM


cuteness..

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

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