Open Poetry #21 |
A Farewell Wish |
Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
A Farewell Wish I was young when you left But how I wish you were still here As I miss your guidance and experience Through these times I struggle I miss our walks I miss our chats But most of all I miss that flame within your heart That kept me safe and warm My memories are few The details are short I ask those close to I But little response I get All I have are my beliefs And vague memories Off our time together If I got that wish I desired It would be for you to return But not for I Yes, I do miss our time together For little we were given We were deprived But saying this There is one less fortunate than I As she was given no time Nor memories off you So if I were a selfish man Yes I would wish for I I would wish for us to reunite But my heart goes out To that young lady Less fortunate than I You may be lost now To the world But you live forever Within my heart And your spirit Will never die within me I feel you beside me In my darkest hour You are my guiding star You are my guardian angel So until that day comes That we reunite I bid you farewell. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Ryan welcome to passions, and I am so glad to have you here with us. You already know how I like this one, words written straith from your heart. I know that you will feel comfortable in these circle of friendship. Im looking forward to read more from you. (((hugs))) Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (06-24-2002 04:15 PM).] |
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Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
Thank you Charisma for your kind comments and i look forward to my time with all you's, i just hope others like my 1st piece of work as much as you did and that i can continue making progress and providing all within with intresting reading. Lastly i believe i owe you 1 more big Thank You as you are my friend that persuaded me to try this and for that i am truely grateful. Ryan2801 xxxxx. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more or your work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Ryan, Welcome to Passions friend. I liked this post and look forward to many more from you. Be well Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS, RYAN!! Enjoyed so much your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh Ryan, this is a sad but beautiful debut, sweet friend, I wish you the best love and hope to follow, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ryan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Oooohhhhh...and please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upo you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Ryan. I, myself, will look forward to reading more of your poetry. It seems to be bent toward the insightful thinker, and I like that. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
Thank You all for your kind and wonderful words, I am glad you's all liked my 1st piece and look forward to supplying you's all with more off my work. Also i would like to thank you's all for another reason which is for taking me in and making me feel so welcome within, that in itself has made me feel settled and encouraged.I would like to send a special thanks to Mistletoe Angel and Sunshine for their wonderful greeting cards, i appreciate this welcome more than words can express. Ryan mwah xxxxx. |
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Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
Thank you all for your wonderful and kind comments on my 1st piece off work and i look forward to supplying many more poems and reading lots off yours.Also i would like to thank you's all for making me feel so welcome, which as truely help settle and encourage me.A special thanks to Mistletoe Angel and Sunshine for those wonderful greetings cards i recieved they are much appreicated.Ryan2801 mwah xxxxx. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It sounds like you've made your peace. I hope so anyway....I enjoyed your poetic farewell very much. Nicely said and done. |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind |
what a wonderful start to a (hopefully) long succession of wonderful words. I hope to rea more of your writing in the near future. its amazing what one single word can do. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful debut, Ryan. Very nice work. Welcome to Passions. LW All writing comes |
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