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The Difference |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To think our sun would leave then darkness would encompass all ...and I, in dark of night, to feel for the candle, to touch the unlit wick there, in false dark pondering if my wondering would bring the flame to me... knowing that without action, without that spark ignited, I would continue alone in the dark until, that is, the come of morn and in the first light of your eyes… to see the flame that was there all along… Revised, repost from 3/2001 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! Karilea....this is beautiful!! Love it! ~Hugs~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* what a gem you wrote here....love it!!!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Fabulous! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Love does light up the dark...you just have to feel for the switch. Enjoyed this!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine you seem to ignite a glow if warm with most any topic enjoyed this piece babe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always a breath of fresh sunshine to us all! (sigh) This shines with such radiant delight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Enjoyed this much....and the ending is very very good....perfect!! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sunshine, this is gorgeous....I especially loved the ending. Love is the spark....we must always keep it burning. Wonderful writing. *Krista Knutson* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If our Sun left, darkness would indeed rule....let's make sure that never happens  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Superb writing PoetFriend SweetShine... *~coco~* |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
That is the light of love ! mycafe |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Love you, my friend, for your courage in writing to the light. Shenachie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That is the difference....flame there all along ....yep.........However, there will always be sun as long as you're around! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah, let us hope that our Sunshine never fades, I don't think I could stand the darkness. Beautiful Karilea.....just beautiful..... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I came back4another read and so I figured while I'm here I'll add your beautiful poem in2my library... Smiles2uSweetPoetFriendSunshine... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (07-24-2002 02:17 AM).] |
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