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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I swear I will be done with sad poems soon. Too late, too late to truly say goodbye now never shall I know your reasons why you disappeared as in a puff of smoke and took with you the promises once spoke. I cannot call enough to bring you back my cries whisper of all that I now lack If possible I'd weave a magic spell but all my efforts spin me into hell. Too late to find my slice of happines your love the one I will forever miss. An empty shell where loving used to be Goodbye I say, though no one hears but me. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
even tho we hear ourselves say "goodbye" sometimes it just won't register...there are some that just never go away...sigh sister sandra! This aches. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, this truly does ache.. And I too hope that you will have someone in your life soon, so that you may write of happier days. You deserve to be happy. ~Hugs~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Heart-wrenched piece....straith from your heart, and touch mine deeply. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
enchanting write. i really felt it. You have a special way about you catalinamoon. Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ok, I'm waiting.  In the meantime I will enjoy your work   |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sandra From the sad things is born the ability to recognize the glad things.  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I, for one, do not wish you to be done with such poems .... I find them, and you, to be deeply truthful. But, somewhere in time* your style shall smile and heart take part in a new way of rhyme It maybe awhile for sorrows of tomorrows to end my friend but not without your smile |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know that it can take a long time to say goodbye...to let go of all the frustration, the disappointments and the pain... too accept that it didn't work out as hoped... But this is the only way to become truly free and prepare ourselves to embrace a new relationship...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but I also know it is never too late to find love again and I know very soon it will be yours and you will be happy forever as you are so deserving of it! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Shoot, nothig sux worse than a goodbye that is only heard by yourself.... (I read this earlier, in my absent mindedness, I forgot to write a reply... Sandra, I look forward to the day when all you write will be bubbly and full of love. Keep the faith and continue to have hope. For, I KNOW YOU CAN find love.... Break out a club and smack the next one you are interested in....Do it from behind, then nurse him back to wellness...and presto, he is yours for the duration....(That is how it works, right?) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Too late to find your slice of happiness? No way, Sandra....one day you'll look back on this and shake your head and smile. You have tons of happiness waiting....I have no doubt. You gonna call Balladeer a liar!  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
my cries whisper of all that I now lack A touching write Cat... Heart hugz2u sweetie... *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know that spinning feeling Sandra~ It's hard to keep from spiraling sometimes. Don't ever stop writing what you feel, I envy you for that and speaking from your heart~ |
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