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Reaching Across Midnight
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Reaching Across Midnight |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It is a hunger haunting my soul knowing I have passions I cannot control Repenting the need holding wanton within doesn’t stop the burning or want of your sin…. The ache still taunts me when sleep is unfound I hear your voice call to me once more, I drown Delving the darkness feeling your fire to love you, to love you that is all I desire Denial of your touch still seeking in vain reaching across midnight come, love me again….. ~SEA~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is really nice Sea...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sue...your name of "SEA" is perfection---a haunting write of return of tides... I DO understand.... giving ache, LEGS... (hmm...too bad it doesn't come with THREE?) YEA... (NOW I'll giggle.)  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is there anyway to make the distance across midnight very short?? That's what I'd want to do for such a passionate lady. That inner fire should never be allowed to just boil in there.... Great poem Sea! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You would've loved what I was going to say till I remembered that it won't always be 4:AM. Suffice it to say...crossing. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful, hauntingly romantic... Enjoyed this Susan. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Girl, it's soooooooooo good to see you~ Lovely desirous thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-14-2002 08:49 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Lovely, lovely. |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
So beautiful...*sigh* and so romantic  Tai |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
To be brutally honest ... you amaze me with your depth of feeling and ability to convey such sensually potent thoughts in verse  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I almost thought I was in Adult there for a minute. This piece is so sensual. I know of course it will be when I see your tag on a post. Thank you for this one. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The ache still taunts me when sleep is unfound I hear your voice call to me once more, I drown gorgeous,and sensually romantic, Sue  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This was very well done. i could feel the ache in the reading. Bravo. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
pictures of a fire place in the dark and a longing we all know... enjoyed this very much. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown [This message has been edited by MidnightSon (06-15-2002 09:24 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SEA...Wonderful Writing!!!! Beauty found in thje sad tone of your words. Your use of poetic language and imagery is excellent. ***Ivy Rose |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sea, what a write...sure know the feeling here! Awesome title as well. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, A haunting write that just grips at the heart and pulls you in. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully haunting, sweet friend, may you always reach through the dark and find solace in the silver linings of loves eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I've missed you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
(clearing throat) LOL  Love it, Susan. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhh Sea, love it when you write like this.....stunning piece. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
peeking in to tell you all thank you!!! I am moving on the 27th so I will be away a bit longer, then as soon as I can, I will be back! *hugs* to you all, I miss you all very much. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just because this deserves a bump |
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