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tabliture of tears |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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have every thing I need to appease my loneliness... have every thing I dreamed-- I toss in satin loneliness... have everything- it seems-- am lonely... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
awww.......big hugs.......but this is just beautiful Seren. Hope all is well, and heres another hug.  I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is an excellent piece, Karen..... It wouldn't be about you, though....right?  ~ Big hugsLyra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so sad my dear! While you're on your knees could you say a little prayer for me too?  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was too much sis...you REALLY should come for a visit...n/j ( halfers on the plane ticket???) *in the meantime* lighting a candle for you in hopes to persuade a smile... Love you sweets!!! ~Devina Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
We're all alone. But at least we're all along together. Loved this, Sen. Y' know how to write desperation (and right desperation too, ah'm sure).Much love t' y'. She said burn ... together. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh Karen....HUGS.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, I am sorry to hear of your loneliness, sweet friend, it seems sometimes nothing can ease the toothache but as long as you hold firm to believe that promises will follow you will find peace within the silence! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I didn't mean to write something so sad and then "disappear"--tsk to me--no need for worry, good poet people...it's just me being me again... and I would be a helluva lot lonelier without the company of "good poet people." I sincerely thank you all. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
so..um...the 1st of July is good fer you??? *batting eyelashes* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
it's good for ME---but you'd have to fight "the keeper of serenity" on that one!  It seems I'm going to be a bit busy---there's a nasty rumor about that I am getting married...  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh so sad penned...touched my heart. Well done, and are you gonna marry 1 july? oh my that's very soon, wish you a lot of God's blessings than. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well crafted indeed! Glad it's just your imagination at work Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It certainly can get lonely out there sometimes. You wrote this so simply, and so very nicely. Now get up and ruffle those feathers of yours!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhhh Serenity, this poem just made me teary-eyed... Nice2read ya as always PoetFriend... It's another keeper4me Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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