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Open Poetry #21

The Happiness You Bring

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-22 06:52 PM

It's raining in my heart
When you are away from my side
I walk this beach alone
My happiness taken with the tide

But my smile always returns
When we are together as one
As you wrap your arms around me
And tenderly kiss me beneath the sun

Our hands interlace together
As we stroll along the sand
You stop to tell me you love me
Then gently kiss the back of my hand

You look deeply into my eyes
And know exactly how I feel
You ignite my inner passion
As your lips on mine now seal

The warm wind blows around us
As the sun starts sinking low
My heart growing ever fonder
As love continues to bloom and grow

Our love rides on waves of devotion
And floats on waters of crystal blue
As we sail towards the sunset
I'll deliver my love to you

Suetang

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-22 07:32 PM

I think this is the happiest poem with the ocean as a backdrop. Mine are always sad

Happiness is a good thing.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-22 07:35 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because I kow exactly how you feel, when my Joanna is on IM and I am talking to her, I feel so very happy, but when she's busy with work I feel kind of sad and glum, but then, when I think about that we might meet this summer for the first time, it makes me feel heavenly! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-06-22 07:36 PM

You are radiant here sweetie...

enjoyed your happy thoughts....

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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