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Pitter-Patter sound
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Pitter-Patter sound |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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 Pitter-Patter Sound ~Tiny toes~ from smallest mold- I watch your innocence float away… If I could~ (as mothers would) ~So delicate~ you’d stay… But now I see~ you’re just like me, (can’t wait to get ahead) Small steps you take~ (in parents wake) Be independent instead… Perfection’s toes~ I watch you grow (wondrous) they touch the ground… No help from us ~so simply blessed~ With *pitter-patter* sound… © copyright Tanya Nicole Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
How darling you are, Mistress D...and your little one could melt iceburgs. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
How very sweet of y'.  I loved this.She said burn ... together. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo cute, sweet friend, I cried reading this because your love for this bundle of joy is sooooooo very true and I know you will share many happy memories together! (kiss on cheek) This is adorable, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Snake New Member
since 2002-06-19
Posts 2 |
OH, do I appreciate this writing! Pitter Patter of little feet and expanding independance is always welcomed, and "not". Great poem, devina! ~SM |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Grinning all over at your 'rainbow britches' cutie~ Little Miss Caiya is a doll ! Nice write little mommy~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
OOops! That was me, devina, "my3monkeytoes" up there. Didn't realize my son's PIP name was still logged on (he's "snake"). now ~SM |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Rob- thank you sweetie...she is our doll...but you know that!!! Mike- starting to like the softer stuff are ya??? G*** so whens your little ones' planned huh?  tyMA- glad you can feel the bond here...she is our whole life and we thank the lord for her every day!!! SM- no need to worry...I've had to share a computer before, so I KNOW!!! Thank you lady!!! Marge- knew you'd appreciate the pants mummy!!! You should come for a visit!??? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tanya darling girl this is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is beautiful confection of delight and your little cuties enhace this wonder with rainbow colour. Beautifully written, well done. You know I love this don’t you? Of course I do You always manage to write exquisitely in this you’ve excelled I love it utterly Love and light   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is delightful, Devina...and so is the pic of the baby...  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
Beautiful little girl D...spoil her for me!!! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I love the way you've displayed the most important steps...the first ones. You are a wonderful mother, and have a beautiful daughter. Hugs, Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww this heart just melt away...way to sweet, your kid and the poem..well done Charisma |
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