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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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More ocean inspired melancholy from last week.(I'm not all this depressed) There is apparently no end in sight no rescue on its' way to me tonight no smallest taste of love comes through my door just painful memories of all before. I gaze along the shore and search for him but sadly I must wait upon his whim thus sunset fades alone into the dark a moonless night, the loneliness is stark. No reason for this pain within my heart but logical has never played a part in loving, I hold close inside my soul forever yearning he who had to go. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (06-22-2002 01:26 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you capture the emotion so powerfully - the images are so well crafted - I liked your poem - thanks - Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello Mizz Sandra!  (and I'm not deressed either! Nuttin' but a t shirt here!  )There is something about the seashore that expresses that eternal longing for "oneness" so perfectly--lands that long for each other, yanno? I know you do... and I'm glad your not depressed (I did understand, just being silly, as always) Love ya lady, and wish I could spend more time here these days...missed ya! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I guess, that from much practice...you have become rather adept at writing poetry with this much feeling... AND I AM happy that you told me you are not feeling all of what has been written, but I do understand that the beach and ocean can certainly bring out many feelings... Hugs Lady.. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love how yr darkness always shines from the page. So, yeh. Good stuff! She said burn ... together. -TON Come and bless Dark sometime, won't you? Pwease? [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-22-2002 01:20 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Some people sure have a knack of saying things. Enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Love the 'inspire moments' .. ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, sweet friend, even when you ay not be all this depressed, my heart goes out to you for you deserve to be so very happy and all it will require is a little time until you find all the joy your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. This is another example of how amazing your writing is. You know I love it don’t you? Fabulous writing darling heart. Your use of line, and form is exquisite and I utterly utterly love this. I am awed by the perfect flow and line in this utter delight, melancholy suits you darling girl. This is exceptional writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sandra.... but now I have the song "Endless Love"... playing over and over in my head....lol. ~Hugs~ |
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