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Yoo-Hoo, Oh Noah !
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Yoo-Hoo, Oh Noah ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Yoo-Hoo, Oh Noah ! ~*Marge Tindal*~  For eight days now, we've not seen the sun Events are looking rather stark Tell me quickly, Noah ... Where'd you put the plans for the ARK ? Another day may be too late the animals are standing toe to toe If you don't find those plans right now they just may have to row ! Come on old man ... get it in gear The water is rising fast If you don't get those plans to me none of us will last~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
This is so cute. I love it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, ya know I love everything that you write....though....... This is definately one of my favs, it is so light and fun. I am glad to see the smile in you today, and that your tears have washed away. Hugs to you sweet poetess! I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I hope you have time to build that ark once you get the plans! Maybe you'd better have a rowboat handy. Sorry about all that rain! We are now out of ours and having a little sunshine. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Supercute, Marge....I had one in the works about the same subject...so I guess I will let it float for a while (pardon the pun) I have many unfinished poems in the works...so don't feel bad... I just adore this one.... so very cute.  ~ floating hugsLyra |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is so cute! I hope the rain stops for you soon. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rain, rain go away the Ark is in the lumber stage although our Margie wants to play the animals are in a rage if the rain ain't gone by morn we may all join the unicorn. Love the verse Marge, so cute. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute poem and graphic, Marge. Could you funnel some of that rain out here to the west?  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TexasRose~ Thanks so much~ GentleSpirit~ LOL-ing ... it's definitely a wet day here ... the 'tears' were only poetry in liquid-motion~ I'm happy has a rain-soaked lark ! Thanks sweetie~ BettyLou~ Got that rowboat ready ... think Noah's got a goldmine in those plans ... and he's hidden them~ Thanks sweet friend~ Lyra~ LOL ... heck fire ... let it set sail~ You're probably like me .... could post two new ones a day and not have to write for another year and a half~ SuzieQ~ Well ... I thank you for those wishes~ Just now .... He did splash a rainbow across the evening sky ... so sure hoping He remembers the promise the way I remember it~  Kethry~ Tee-Hee-Hee ... Big giggles here~ Thanks gal~ PoetdeVine~ Be verrrrryyyy careful what you wish for~ This one's a real wench~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Poor mummy...don't dwown ower there!!!  You member how to do the "no more rain" dance don't ya??? let me come help you out!!!  Very cute~ love ya!!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
sweet...sweet...sweet...! Animals do complain too ! mycafe |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You're quite the ark-angel, Margie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very cute! loved this one miss margie! you know, as happy as i am to see the rain, its been especially challenging for me.....my brother broke out my rear window just before all the rain started!!! (and i dont have a new window YET!...lol) grrrr...LOL hugs,g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
what an adorable poem! You sure have a knack to make people smile!!! Keep writing. ~Neha |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwwww Marge to read you is always a pleasure beautiful lady. Thanks for sharing your beauties with us. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh Margie this is delightful and you're just so clever! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DevinaChild~ This little Cherokee knows how to START the rain ... Grandma forgot to tell me how to STOP it~  Come on down, sugar ... and bring that sweet little babycakes, Caiya~ MyCafe~ Yeah ... the little critters were first ones in line for the rowboat ! Thanks hon~ Balladeer~ LOL-ing ... now ... whatever were you thinking when you saw the title ... Tee-Hee ! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL DG~ Oh my ... well ... how hard is it to just spread your brother across the broken window until it's fixed ??? *Hugs* .... SpiritOfTwilight~ Thank you so much ... they may be grinning, cause it's not raining on their parade !  Charisma~ You sweet lady ... I see it took a FLOOD to get you back here ! Now ... did ya' post a purty ? ETHome~ LOL ... does 'clever' compute as DESPERATE ? Well .... happy to report that HE lived up to the promise of the rainbow ... YAHOO ! The sun is actually peeking out this morning~ Whew ! Darned good thing too ... cause Noah never showed up with those plans~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ha, ha, I'll trade 'ya weather. Next week's forecase - triple digit heat. Looks like fire weather here. So, I'd totally trade ya, Marge! Cor |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... I love the way nothing can dampen your spirits... or dilute your ink. *G* This is a treasure, Marge. *S* It seems you're having the weather we had last summer... this year, it's drought. Last year, Allison dumped almost 3 feet of rain on us in 3 days... this year, we've had less than 1/3 of that amount for the entire year... Too much or too little with no moderation... you'd think God had put a manic depressive in charge of the dipper dousing us, hunh? LOL |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think the plans were waylaid in ARKansas by a certain ex-prez of dubious reputation  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Folks~ Six years since I wrote this one ... and now our area is simply under siege from Tropical Storm Fay~ She has shown no mercy to the State of Florida~ She is STILL dumping her fury on us~ If you are keeping track of her at all, then when you hear Volusia County or DeLand ... that's me~ I am inland 19 miles West of Daytona Beach~ I am more than safe where I am ... but I have friends who are flooded out of their homes~ Please keep them all in your prayers~ My poem was meant to lift spirits after the rains we received way back then ... but the flood-water damage that folks here are experiencing is very not-so-funny~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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