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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-22 06:23 AM


Love Rejected

At various times
we may find
that our love
has been rejected.

It then becomes
our unfortunate task
to make sure
that our love
is redirected.

JamesLee
June22
2002

Yes it happened to me
at various times.
Thank God not recently.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (06-22-2002 06:29 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-06-22 10:57 AM


James, I have had this very same thing happen to me. I never thought love would be rejected. Sometimes, I think some people just don't know what true love is. That is why they reject it.
Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-06-22 11:11 AM


thanks for the powerful window on experiences of life and how we struggle through them - Paul
catalinamoon
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3 posted 2002-06-22 12:19 PM


Excellent piece, James. Good idea, too.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-06-22 01:39 PM


I love the rhyme here-and the idea.

Nan

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5 posted 2002-06-22 03:43 PM




(sigh) Oh James, I too know these kind of circumstances and I know as long as you have the courage to, your love will always be heading in the right direction at all of lifes intersections! (big huggssssss) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

my3monkeytoes
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6 posted 2002-06-22 03:46 PM


Woo-Hoo!  Let's hear it for "redirection".  Married for the second time to who should have been my "first and only".     Love your writing here!  

~SM

Martie
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7 posted 2002-06-22 04:07 PM


James

Wise words in your poem, and so true.  Enjoyed!

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-06-22 06:31 PM


Hello James

I'm sure all of us can relate to this.  Sometimes we are left asking "why?".

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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9 posted 2002-06-22 10:40 PM


Loved this pondering piece of you James...

we've all been there, done that (as you well KNOW I have over the years!! rofl)

enjoyed this!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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10 posted 2002-06-23 05:18 AM


like it a lot James!!

((hugs))
Charisma


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11 posted 2002-06-23 08:21 AM


YEA JAMES!!!  Lets here it for starting over again and gettin gon with life and finding love..  YEA!!!

I really enjoyed that piece.

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


SimplyGold
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12 posted 2002-08-08 05:08 PM


Very true, well said.

SimplyGold

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13 posted 2002-08-08 05:59 PM


enjoy
Enchantress
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14 posted 2002-08-08 06:12 PM


You say so much..
in so few words...
Glad to hear it isn't now.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

WhiteRose
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15 posted 2002-08-08 06:44 PM


I'm glad to hear it isn't now either. I think we have all had our love rejected. It's an awful thing. Well I could go on and on about this subject but I'll just say I liked the poem for the truth it spoke.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

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16 posted 2002-08-08 06:49 PM


Very wise words Sir James.....much truth
within....Mahalo!

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-06-27 05:52 PM


May I offer a toast as we all share a glass of delicious wine.   I hope all that have lost a love will find a new love...love and all the beautiful things it has to offer is waiting for our embrace...James
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