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Oceanic Canvas Haiku
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Oceanic Canvas Haiku |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 Sea foam curved in clouds rainbow watercolor art brushing a new wave Touch of azure sea Arching bold into the sky Waves leaving more blue Poetry is: |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When the blue is as bright as your words present, then it is a blue most definitely appreciated. Wonderful Haikus you give us. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always make such beautiful poetic waves across these pages, this reminded me so much of the gorgeous California coast, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Mark: And thanks so much for reading and leaving me such gracious words. Noah:Yes we could say California..That is where I first got the ocean into my bloodstream(grew up there and came to Hawaii about 4 years ago after traveling through the South Pacific...yep the poems about ocean are my love affair with sea. thanks for always being so kind in your words to me hugs to both, Cher Poetry is: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cher, although in my heart the mountains will always be my home, there is something so peaceful about the Ocean that draws me back over and over again. This is a delightful gem, and that graphic is just awesome. Well done, and very enjoyed!!! somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Cheryl ... these are both delightfully written ... you've captured the power and beauty in so few words. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Gentle Spirit: my other love is of the mountains..I lived there for 20 years before the sea claimed my attentions...I write of mountains in haiku when the fall and winter come..I miss diamond snow....thanks for such a wonderful comment. Kit: wow ..I think my job is accomplished if this does what you say. any kind word from you is so very welcome and treasured. hugs to both, Cher Poetry is: |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Cher...you have created a canvas of words...James |
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