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Drifting (OLD poem)
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Drifting (OLD poem) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Someone wanted me t' post this. Here y' go! Drifting A bird fell from the sky and broke its wings. It broke its eyes. It broke its legs. It broke its spirit. It broke its persistence. It broke its insistence. It broke its hopeless hope. It broke its loveless love. It broke its uncared for moments and unseen pleasures. It broke its soul and past for present. I broke. It drifts like a feather on the water. It drifts like a petal on a tear. It drifts like an icicle and a glacier. I drift like the sun at dusk and dawn, All the in-between time alone in the sky. Friends are clouds. What latch, what hinge, What button, what switch, What breath, what touch, What moment, what time. What's together? What song, what prayer, What sin, what dare, What love, what loss, What hate, what cost? What -- I'm drifting -- do I do when I'm drifting? I'm drifting, and now I'm gone. She said burn ... together. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"like a petal on a tear" your images are somehow both crystal and sterling...reading you is sorta like walking in some else's footprints through sand...wondering, yanno? yep, I am sure ya do.  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Like this a lot, Mikey... *smiles* ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It drifts like a feather on the water. It drifts like a petal on a tear. It drifts like an icicle and a glacier. I drift like the sun at dusk and dawn, This drifts so beautifully down the page, Mr.Squirrel.... I love the feel of it  ~ hugs from a fellow rodent friendLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks for takin' the drift with me, all.She said burn ... together. |
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