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Anvrill
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in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-06-21 11:02 PM


This could get addictive.



Feel me,

a phantom lover in your bed.

Ssh, don't stir.

Don't try to see,

just go back

to your soft sleep.

Dream me there.



Feel me,

running lazy trails

down your back.

I lick my lips

and whisper words

we tell each other every day.

The meaning can only strengthen.



Feel me,

soft and warm beside you

even though now

so far away.



Distance, my love,

should mean nothing to us

when we are imprinted

on each other's minds.



Hugs an' kisses to my morbid rodent baby.


© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-21 11:03 PM


LL Hager is a goddess of immensely cool proportions! I'm not biased, either!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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2 posted 2002-06-21 11:05 PM




(smiles) Yes!!! I am so very happy you are here, as I know Michael will always be blessed to have you! (smiles) May you always feel loves smiles no matter how far apart you may be at times, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-06-21 11:06 PM


Happy thoughts from this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-22 12:02 PM


Anvrill....this is unbelievable....
I really absolutely love it

Keep on writing...keep on posting...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-06-22 01:02 AM


"This could get addictive."

yes, yes it does....as does reading certain poets, I find.

You are a refreshing breath of air here!



Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-06-22 06:47 AM



What you say, addictive...and no cure...
but at least it does not add calories...

this is very, very nice...

I think you're going to like it here...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-06-22 06:51 AM


Enjoyed reading this one...mucho...James
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-06-22 09:59 AM


I think reading you could get addictive also.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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9 posted 2002-06-24 02:24 AM


One more *bump* an' off t' bed...

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-06-24 07:58 AM


Beautiful penned, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us.

Charisma

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