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Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-06-21 10:19 PM

Awright, so I've never done this before... Be gentle!

This poem was written for mein Mikhail; you guys know him as the morbid rodent, bsquirrel.

To know your touch,

breathtaking-warm,

will bring new worlds to me.

Your soft, gentle eyes

have haunted and colored

my waking time

and that of dreams.

Your voice,

as it sings so

tremulously

seems to always echo

in my ears.

My mind, love,

is captivated

by everything in yours.

I live to feel

a tremulous kiss

to match your song,

to wrap me up in the knowledge,

assurance,

of the love in both our souls.

Every breath I take,

Mikhail,

is bringing me closer to you.

There must then come a time

when we will exist as one.

So. *ducks head, blushes* Be gentle!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-21 10:20 PM

I like the way this was presented. it is very good. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-21 10:21 PM

Hi! Can I marry you?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

3 posted 2002-06-21 10:21 PM

Mikhail!

Yes.

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2002-06-21 10:23 PM

There is NO need for anyone to be gentle, my dear. This is splendid..so soft and beautiful. We can really read your love in every word, every line.

Welcome to our humble home. I REALLY look forward to more from you...please check your email for a special greeting.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-21 10:25 PM

BRAVO!!! Wow, this is wonderful, sweet friend, Mikhail is a wonderful part of our family indeed just as I know you will be too, welcome, this is a lovely and beautiful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Anvrill, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) Don't worry, we are all here to support you and I know here you will always feel comfortable and realize it is gentle here! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anvrill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-21-2002 10:26 PM).]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-06-21 10:28 PM

This ain't the first time we've confirmed marriage, by the way.

So keep yr hats on (can I have one?).

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine

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Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2002-06-21 10:28 PM

I do believe this may be the first real marriage proposal here.

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-06-21 10:30 PM

Maybe...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-06-21 10:30 PM

What a beautiful entrance you have made!
I'm sure you will love it here!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

10 posted 2002-06-21 10:33 PM

(claps hands!)

(squeals!)

I am loved!

Damn, there goes *my* dreary mood...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-06-21 10:33 PM

Wonderful first post it is wonderfully soft and loving and such a delight to read. Welcome to PiP’s I’m sure you’ll find many friends here and you’ll be a great asset too.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2002-06-21 10:36 PM

So pleased to meet BSQ's equal half...well done on this, and I am looking forward to more from you...then a little more, then a little bit more...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2002-06-21 10:41 PM

Wow...I think I just witnessed forever...lovely, tender writing...Welcome to passions!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2002-06-21 10:42 PM

Your soft, gentle eyes

have haunted and colored

my waking time

and that of dreams.

Your voice,

as it sings so

tremulously

seems to always echo

in my ears.

===================

Welcome to Poetry Land .... so nice to meet the lady who inspires such cool poetry in Mike...he colors our world with his words.
This is a lovely poetic declaration of heart.
peace and poetry

jm

"It's not about having what you want ...
It's wanting what you've got"

S.C.

Stapelton
Junior Member

since 2002-04-16

Posts 13
Canada

15 posted 2002-06-21 10:46 PM

excellent poem
wish to read more

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

16 posted 2002-06-21 10:54 PM

Oh lovely....just lovely, Anvrill

Beautiful from start to finish and in between.
You sing of love and it just rings from that gorgeous poem.....

Loved it!

I am so happy that my fellow rodent's better half is posting here...

I think Mr.Squirrel and I are the only 2 rodents who post our poetry here at Passions...

So, when's the wedding?

~ serious welcoming hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

17 posted 2002-06-22 12:39 PM

Well MISS, er...Mrs?

Welcome to you, my new friend!

and, as I said to someone else,

--You have a raw quality of honesty, that is not without the delicacy of vulnerability. I call it, "writing thought-print". I welcome you with open arms and warm hugs, lady. I look forward to reading many more!

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

18 posted 2002-06-22 12:58 PM

Let's see ... there is first the "WELCOME" ... so nice to have you join us. Then there is the obvious ... congrats and it is a pleasure to finally know the source of his muse. Then of course, there is the applause for the poetry itself. No need to ask for gentleness ... it is wonderful. Very easy flow and appealing format, not to mention the feelings conveyed in a splendid choice of verbage. All together, I would say you had a perfect batting score with this post.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

19 posted 2002-06-22 03:08 AM

WOW!!!
you've done an excellent job...very loving, warm and beautiful, well done and welcome to passions.
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

20 posted 2002-06-22 05:41 AM

"Every breath I take is bringing me closer to you."
I really like this line...
The title is nice...James

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

21 posted 2002-06-24 02:22 AM

*bump* so Lori can read th' responses she missed (or so the poem can sink from sight forevermore, whichever

)

Mikey needs a life

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

22 posted 2002-06-24 09:54 AM

Mikey does need a life.

Thanks, one and all!

Feel my angsty reachiness!

[This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-24-2002 09:54 AM).]

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