Open Poetry #21 |
Legends Upon The Whispering Winds |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Legends Upon The Whispering Winds The mists of yesterday rise upon the mountains of once upon a time when the ancients walked throughout the realms of the distant past. Proud was the heritage of those who dwelled amongst the beauty of that which was created by the makers hand. Life was lived in serene simplicity when the Earth Mother provided all that was needed for existance upon her fruitful lands. Joyous were the celebrations of a life that had yet been untouched by the clenching fists of mankind. Waterfalls of mellow beauty flowed in abundance into the mountains and valleys of forever more. Tranquility unfolded in nights of star lit wonder where camp fires burned on the dawning horizons of future journeys yet unseen. Great were the stories that were carved in the memories of elders with wisdom abounding being passed from generation to generation with pride. Edlers spoke in the stillness of the night disturbed only by the occassional crackling within the fires that burned of eternity. The white wolf spirit listened with respect from yon mountain side, with understanding that he has grown in wisdom with his native brothers. Luna peeks from amongst the pines hidden in silver glow as the white wolf spirit howls his presence into the skies of the night. ~Those days of old have long since passed~ The past has slowly diminshed as it has been dealt with harshly by the cruel hand of mankind, yet still, the mists gather, Luna eternally shines, the mountains listen, and the heart that seeks can still hear the white wolf howling breaking through the silence of eternity as he calls to the brotherhood of spirits uniting they gather once again~ ~Their legends can still be heard upon the whispering winds~ (c) Donna Smith 06-19-02 You can view more beautiful artwork at www.kempergalleries.com I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-22-2002 09:50 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna...this beautiful write of yours has had such an impact on me that I am sitting here absolutely speechless. How amazing your writing has become! Fantastic...I love it! ~Hugs~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written!!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy, those words mean so much to me. I have learned so much by being a part of passions, and appreciate all that I have learned about writing here, along with many other life lessons. My own daughters heritage is that of the Cherokee, (thus the name Cherokee Child)and we all can only pray forgiveness for the atrocities against those who have went before, and hope that somewhere in time we will all not just learn of them, but that we will learn the lessons that should have been learned ages ago. thanks much my friend, your support keeps me wanting to write this way. Hugs. ~Loner, thanks so much for the kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-21-2002 08:51 PM).] |
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Cherokee Child Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 13 |
Mom, I really love this one. Awesome. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
the images of the words - the images them selves - thetotal is just so powerful - onemust come back to thismany times to gatgher all the meaning it has to offer - thanks - Paul |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gentle Spirit, this is astounding in beauty and powerful in truth. Write on! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
*********CLAPPING WILDLY!********* BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! OH DONNA, THIS TOUCHED ME SO DEEPLY, I LOVE IT!!! Having a large part of my ancestory being of Cherokee blood, I can relate to this so very much and it saddens me so very much to see savage capitalists and governments trod upon my familys land and compress their space and try and attack their values, yet I applaud them for holding firm to what they believe in without being violent and how the stories and tales are something that still has never passed in time! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, now I am crying in tears, I am adding this to my library now because this is a true instant classic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upo you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-21-2002 08:21 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely gorgeous, Donna... Both the poem and the pictures which go so well with it... Beautiful job ~ lots of hugs Lyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Spirit filled and fulfilling...Thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Donna! Just came back to say I love your picture!! ~Hugs~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Donna-(da-na)- and for the little one "Cherokee Child" - ayoli vhnai hia tsalagi (meaning Child/young of the Cherokee) Osiyo (hello), First let's state the obvious ... The "Title" catching has now officially reversed itself and I am the one caught by the title. Secondly, you already knew that I would make sure to see this one didn't you? Now, as to the write ... well, I am pleased beyond description to be here and read such a well written piece regardless of the subject. Your writing has grown much since my travels took me away and it goes to show you just how much a person can learn (no matter how good they are coming in ) just from being in Passions. Your knowledge in certain areas of this write show that not only have you read and studied, but you show much understanding and that is a VERY COOL THING in my book. Well written and very much enjoyed. Thank you. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (06-22-2002 01:42 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The white wolf spirit listened with respect from yon mountain side, with understanding that he has grown in wisdom with his native brothers. ============================== Luna peeks from amongst the pines hidden in silver glow as the white wolf spirit howls his presence into the skies of the night. =============================== tonite on the phone, a certain cowboy told me I had to come see the pics on this... I love Maija ... I have a collection of her "Indian Princess" prints....and your free verse is a inspiring as the artwork is...wonderfully done imagery and message are found in your words. Very cool write Donna...love your new pic too peace and poetry jm "It's not about having what you want ... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Spectacular write GentleSpirit... When I got2the part of the 'white wolf' my goodness I was sooooo happy I got the chance2nite2read this poem... Thanx sweetie4a fantastic read... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!!!! I truly enjoyed it thoroughly. Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
CC, little one... Paul, I am so pleased that my simple offering of words leave you with meaning. I thank you for that. Kethry, thank you so much. So many truths have been hidden and the more they are known, the more we can understand. Hugs. Noah, an instant classic.....oh you are way to good to me. I thank you. Although I am not part native American, my daughter has this blood in her. I see it in her spirit.....Thank you. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lyra, thanks for the kind words and hugs. Geez and for putting up with me while I got this picture thing right. Happy hugs to you sweetie. Martie, thanks so much for taking the time to stop in. Your a sweetie. Nancy, now your making me blush. Thanks hon. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Osiyo Mark, and thank you for teaching me the name that April has chosen for passions. Well no.....I didn't really know that you would make sure to see this, but sure am glad you took the time. What a wonderful compliment that is, thank you. I believe Passions is a wonderful place, and the key word here is GROWING. There is still so much to learn. I try to do it every day.....lol. As to the subject, there is still so much for me to learn there also. Even from my highschool days, almost every paper I ever had to do was on either this theme, or on any theme to do with nature. I have learned some through the years, yet know that there is so much more. I do think I have a better understanding now than before. My daughters father was descendant from the Cherokee... lol.....even looks it too...so again, I have learned. There is so much to learn even still. Thank you for your gracious reply, as always it is so much appreciated. Janet, geez, thank you. It was first that I saw Maija through one of your poems, so I thank you for sharing that gift with us all. It pleases me that the cowboy thought this piece worthy. And aren't some of those pics just awesome..... sigh..... The messages are just kinda what I hear when I am alone with nature, and God do I love being alone with nature!! he he.....thanks for liking the pic to, Lord knows I bugged enough of people to help me figure it out. Hugs and peace to you sweet I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-23-2002 02:18 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
coco, I am pleased that you were happy to read. I love the white wolf, ha, I love everything to do with nature. Thanks. Charisma, I do so appreciate that. It means alot to me to know my words are enjoyed. Hugs. thanks to poetry land, hugs and peace to all. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You just shared a beautiful story Donna ! mycafe |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
MC, thank you. Sometimes all I have to do is listen......and the words just come. Thank you and hugs. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Wonderful, You have truely captured the feelings of many. Keep the spirit. |
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