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Hush Music Love |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Part these moments Count them spilling across shoulder sways Reign them with your finger’s riff each strand you play high upon neck this sunkissed reason to entertain thought tempo gales My window ways lean to you I sense you, before touch Could such notes feel any more, as requiem for any other love Glossed, copper spun Your voice rhythm plays me Chauntress lips warm full, for more in static strum lace Need this moment..Now before I lose my always in you and lash this light to toss of reflection String this measure soundly so that you will never leave me madrigal alone With nothing to spare of sane desire you must press time’s knowing movement into me My patience wears white gauze rain My soul only knows bravo in this stave of serenade hush Let there be no air between us |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"My soul only knows bravo in this stave of serenade hush Let there be no air between us"   (smiles) Oh Regina, I love this, sweet friend, this is sooooo beautifully sensual yet it whispers with such silence and emotion, sweet friend, this flares with beauty, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No air....you're right...NO air between and no air in my lungs from holding my breath all the way through this...Seriously, I didn't hold it that long.....I would have passed out.... But...maybe I will pass out anyway from the sheer touch of nice in feel of this piece of elegance..... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
My patience wears white gauze rain My soul only knows bravo in this stave of serenade hush Let there be no air between us What beautiful words, Reg..."white gauze rain"...."no air between us" I just love the way the poem all goes together  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang girl! You are on a roll! Beautiful...perfectly beautiful! Enjoyed so very much! ~Hugs~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very poignant tune here Regina... quite seductive melody to top it!!! Take care! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, so now I gotta go hug my guitar and offer my humble fingers to the tenderness that lies in it's core. I have been impressed with your writing from the very first one of yours I read and this is just a reminder as to why. Very beautifully written and the impact of it's contents come across so soft but yet leave the reader knowing that they won't forget the feel. Superb writing and I truely thank you for such a remarkable piece to indulge in. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dag nabit and I bought this kazoo costume for the party..(mumble *&3,@ shucks) greasy glass smooth babe make one love music |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Regina...good for you... and better for the readers... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Glossed, copper spun Your voice rhythm plays me Chauntress lips warm full, for more in static strum lace Need this moment..Now before I lose my always in you and lash this light to toss of reflection String this measure soundly so that you will never leave me madrigal alone With nothing to spare of sane desire you must press time's knowing movement into me My patience wears white gauze rain My soul only knows bravo in this stave of serenade hush Let there be no air between us ======================= WHEW...."strumming my bain" with her pen  Have mercy girlie..this is awesome...I read this lastnight and knew a certain cowboy was gonna love it..very very cool write Reggie..the vocabulary and imagery is as impressive as the expression Chauntress lips warm full, for more in static strum lace My patience wears white gauze rain how cool are those lines... waay cool...just like the poetess  "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Regina A most glorious read!! |
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