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Hands of Time
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Hands of Time |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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~Hands of Time~ If I could stretch the hands of time Save sixty a day ~for play~ I’d embrace it in a heartbeat Would love to live that way Create momentum hour by hour Grip the churning spinning power Slow the pace of life today patent family traditions way… Divulge of olden ancient times worship connection family design… Ever enemy in sight gripping stripping ~hands of time~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very speechless. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tanya, this is soooooo wonderfully touching as all your wonderful poems are, sweet friend, I love how you always sound so sincere, this is excellent! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-20-2002 10:32 PM).] |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
I enjoyed your verse of family time sweetie!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is very lovely Tanya. Enjoyed the read this afternoon. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Do I ever wish I could stash 60 little minutes away for a while....then use them any way I want to....Hmmmmm?// A thinker of a poem...thanx.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ This is a beaut of a write~ I just love the very thought of it all~ GREAT hon ! Love n' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Tanya I really enjoyed this one, very well written. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a captivating read - thanks devina - Paul |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I know the feeling. Sometimes to stop the clock is so enticing, and at the same time the next moments pleasure awaits. Nicely written you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Time keeps going faster and faster.... I think we really need to have 48 hour days now because we do so much more than we used to do... I loved your poem, Devina...  ~ hugs of timeLyra |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great write..enjoyed the read hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Devina, it's always a pleasure2come across a treat like this that you have shared with us here... I compliment you on this splendid write PoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
This is a very beautiful and thought provoking poem. Keep writing~ Neha |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wouldn't it be wonderful to control time-even a little? Well done piece. Sandra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thank you all for your replies...seems time is yet an obstacle to be challenged... *still determined*  take care all you sweet people!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Sharp thoughts in here ! mycafe |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
if I could stop time I'd take you into my arms for an endless kiss Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
mycafe- thank you for that!! Interloper- Now was that WITH tongue...or without???? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you for your words Kindly, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
devina, Hold the hands of time within, for they are yours to share... BC |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Wow, the beauty you portray reflects through your poetry Devina, you are so beautiful. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
YES!!! Stretch some for me too please…there never seem to be enough hours in a day to do all I want to do. You can never win or lose |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I say we just smash all the watches and clocks and just live by our own inner time. . . what do you say T?? loved it hon. . . you get better every day. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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