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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-06-10 10:48 PM

Her voice is rainy gold. It shines in her shiver.

I can smell her light. Like strawberries in December.

The sky is tired. Gray puddle's sky shine.

I am yours and yours are mine.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-10 10:49 PM

I love it. I feel the emotion.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-06-10 11:23 PM

another interesting write, bsquirrel. Romance with a twist...

*smile*
~r.t.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-06-10 11:47 PM

My my, aren't we inspired of late??!!
*making the silly kissy faces*

Good to see you soooo uh...what's the word??

...romantical???
...sweet??

yah, one of those me thinks...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-06-11 10:30 AM

clever bsq, short little blade,
but so very sharp...cool

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-06-11 10:33 AM

bsquirrel
An eloquent cupcake. Enjoyed the icing.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2002-06-11 11:15 AM

I love how you weave "her" into words.....you sparkle...it shows....

Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (06-11-2002 11:15 AM).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-06-11 11:16 AM

enjoy your read

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

8 posted 2002-06-11 11:57 AM

Short, sweet, and to the point - lovely. I always enjoy what you write, and this is no exception.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

9 posted 2002-06-11 12:01 PM

whimsical write o yuh

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

10 posted 2002-06-12 12:13 PM

Thanks all.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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