Open Poetry #21 |
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Pain |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada ![]() |
I know it hurts, I feel the pain. I feel your loss, I feel my gain. Which hurts more? Forced to feel the hurt, Of one I adore, One with whom I flirt. I face a monster I face the strongest loss, Like a man's dog, Like a tree's moss. I face a dark monster, I face my own evil side, But in the end, In whom can I confide? ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions! I always like to welcome a fellow Canuck! Good discussion with yourself....I know it's harder to understand oneself than anything else. Don't tend to see ourselves in a bad light do we? Good write! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I liked this one. The first four lines were especially powerful, and the last two were a good ending. Nan |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks everyone. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Oh Liam, this is sooooooo heartwrenchingly powerful, sweet friend, i hope through all the pain you both find solace and stillness! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely written with power... Welcome to PiP. Do hope you enjoy your time here.. |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to PiP!!! Interesting conversation with your "evil" self - hope your "good" side won. Sympathy to you, friend, for the cold you have, and yes, there are lot's of Canadians here... that's 'cause we're a real creative bunch - eh!! ss Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks everyone. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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