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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-06-19 09:38 PM




Soft Sigh

A soft sigh goodbye
Fluttering on the gentle
Wind of memories


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-06-19 09:47 PM


Very beautiful Tara,  have missed you here.
Hope things are better for you...

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2 posted 2002-06-19 09:58 PM


Beautiful Tara....
Have missed you!
~Hugs~

*Hey the font color matches your hair!*

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3 posted 2002-06-20 08:20 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Tara, this is a sad but beautiful senryu, sweet friend, my  heart goes out to you and now I wish the new love you have to your heart to have you sighing softly happily always and for you always to hold your past love in your memories, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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4 posted 2002-06-20 12:30 PM


This is beautiful Tara....You have got this style down really well!
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5 posted 2002-06-20 02:59 PM


tara,
very sad but beautiful and touching
senryu. i hope everything is okay with
you. i'll be in touch. love ya hon.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-06-20 03:00 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

rosepetals25
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7 posted 2002-06-20 08:05 PM


Barry - I'm glad you liked it.  

Enchantress - Thank you

Noah - I'm glad you stopped into read.

ethome - I love this form of poetry thank you.

Aimster - Hey chickie.  I miss you Thanks for reading.

the_loner - Thank you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2002-06-21 02:19 AM


At least there are a few names I still recognize.   Wonderfully written and fills the template of a Senyru perfectly.
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9 posted 2002-06-21 06:19 AM


Beautiful..

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2002-06-21 08:31 PM


Mark - It is soooooo great to see your name   I hope you are well!  Thank you for stopping to read, I'm off to take a look at your poem now!  I get all excited when I see something from you, it doesnt happen often. Of course, I haven't been here much lately lol. Life and some other factors has kept me from coming in as much as I once did. Ok, now that I wrote you a letter... errr... thanks

Jenn - Thank you chickie.  

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (06-21-2002 08:32 PM).]

paladin
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11 posted 2002-06-21 11:37 PM


The essence of a thought.One good sentence describes a tree often better than a whole book of words.

paladin

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12 posted 2002-06-21 11:58 PM


Oh how very pretty, Tara...

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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