»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
the Sailing On Solar Winds
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
the Sailing On Solar Winds |
|
|
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
|
 the Sailing On Solar Winds the solar winds blow her flowing robe of silver star candles murmur their assent coalesced in a union of sanctity married spirit and spirit of all man vast is measured by sand dots on an infinite white easel a blip so tiny that galaxies regard her with little more regard than plankton She possesses the eyes that the soul sees with sad-sighed, with knowledge that human limitations with the long sight of an eagle, and growl of lion still cannot reach any of the stars he sees at night so he scratches the black peat of the sky with his silver ship, for some new Orient Path. deep into the bosom of heaven the arrow penetrates never encountering even a casual angel in their moral shielded galley travel on a prairie, a boy with telescope-eyes points at the sky seeing a new star in his favorite constellation gliding on solar winds move farther and farther away from home |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Picasso Lyrics - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I envisioned a small sweet boy looking up and stargazing with his father and he was reciting the names of the constellations to him, only noticing a new splendour to behold! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling boy oh my dearest friend this it is utterly utterly perfect so beautifully well written and perfectly presented poetry. The flow of lines the excellent language usage and the way this is layered with meaning is awesome. The completeness of it is utterly utterly wonderful. I love it, as I said excellent absolutely perfect writing. Yet again you carry within your words some awesome imaging. Utterly utterly wonderful writing.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
||
|
Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
... [speachless]... |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
on a prairie, a boy with telescope-eyes points at the sky seeing a new star in his favorite constellation gliding on solar winds move farther and farther away from home ------------------------------------------ Wonderful words here Jeff.. Love the presentation as well. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff Such wonderful images were portrayed through your words, fabulous! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
||
|
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
vast is measured by sand dots on an infinite white easel Oh what wording, Jeff....  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
THat was a real pleasant trip....thanks for taking me along! |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff To go where no man has gone before...such dreams come true, again and again...why not again? "so he scratches the black peat of the sky with his silver ship, for some new Orient Path." Loved this! |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jeff, another treasure you have given us to keep our minds feeling the breeze of sail beneath the curtain of stars...thank you.... |
||
|
Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
What an experience it would be to discover a new star in the vast galaxy eh? But do you think the world would be ready for a Dulcy Star? *LOL* Think not! Bumpages...heheehe... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
