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Silver Threads |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Silver Threads Once upon a midnights bed I watched the brightest moonlight thread. Weave across my blankets pour A silver thread in search of more It crept across the bumps and dips Caught me at my finger tips And when it touched it felt like jell And I was caught in moonlights spell It willowed me as if in dream And out the window I did stream A finite on the meadows ground With twilight magic dancing round Where shadows swayed in weightless Vail And silver leaves on wind set sail It damp my pillow wet with leak. As tears of brine flowed down my cheek And butterflies flew round my head Till I did join this joy in wed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful. Moonbeams are a wonderful thing, and your writing suits them. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Sweet comment, thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how beautiful this morning's read is Sy!! Did you hear my sigh? Well...it sure was loud enough after reading this wondeful piece! How dreamy and delicious this is! Great write! ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Once upon a midnights bed I watched the brightest moonlight thread. Weave across my blankets pour A silver thread in search of more ================================== A finite on the meadows ground With twilight magic dancing round Where shadows swayed in weightless Vail And silver leaves on wind set sail ======================================== And butterflies flew round my head Till I did join this joy in wed ========================================  ~*~ Stinkylove...you are my prince of imagery this is so lovely..it sparkles with your rhymes divine and dances like moonbeams on water with your cadence..and the imagery is dipped in silver star dust. Youve penned a masterpice to print out and put with the picture above....its one of my most fave pics I found on the internet...its also my screen saver and I have a poster of it..now I have a poem to put with it that matches its wonderlust. *winkiewinkie*   mothyme "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yes....thread of silver steel string of romance strummed by cupid fingers perfect |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
SO delicately woven...and the final couplet...oh my...sigh, sy...pure delight and joy! only YOU can do that to me! Wisdom and innocence...that's YOU. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I wrote a poem once about such a moon...but not as beautiful as this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress, Have a good day darlen.  JM, I am honored to be with the things you love, love ya. WWRS Dark Shadows, Perfect, pretty heavy stuff. Serenity, Yes the eternal dreamer. Martie, I'm sure your poem was as bright as the moon. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My stars ! This is just the loveliest penning~ You even make my *sighs* sigh~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
This is ethereal writing at its very best thanks for the brush of you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marage, Sighs, sigh. Thank you sweet. Soleil Noir Beautiful comment and I thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You sure have butterflies on your mind, sweet friend, moonbeams are very beautiful indeed and inspire me always especially when there is full moon fever! (big hugggsssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, you are an enchanter of the moonbeams trace, and keeper of the nights magic this is utterly perfect the simplicity the elegance and the grace this is written with is perfectly delicious, and I love it utterly but you knew that didn’t you. Wonderful writing as always. This has lines that are spun with dreams light into a cloth of wonder, it lays over the soul like a gown of delight. A wonderful truly exceptional piece of writing. Yes I love it, I love it utterly utterly. Didn’t you like the little poem I scribbled for you? I thought it might flutter you into nights delight, I suppose I’ll just have to see if I can spin another but I haven’t got your skill darling boy But at least I tried to do you justice love. Your writing however is perfect and this is utterly utterly elegant and spun light   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Marge, You are a very talented writer and your flattery flies me to the moon. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy now who flatters whom, calling me Marge is flattery indeed. If I could write like her I would be in heaven. However that’s not going to happen so I’ll continue to read you and her and hope I acquire some skill by a form of osmosis. I really did love this one Seymour darling boy it is special  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Sorry about the Marge, It happens when you get old. But I ment what I said. |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Seymour hi there, don’t worry about calling mum Margie she would have been honoured. Flattery indeed, mum can’t write even half so well This is wonderful writing, I love the words in this they are excellent. Sorry I’ve not been in here for a little while I’ve had some very odd shift times. However I’ve had mum print out your daily delights and so I have had your wonderful work to hand. It’s good for mum to work so don’t feel sorry for her she and Krissy should suffer a little They after all are off to the U.S. those of us who are the workers have to stay behind. I hope you all have a great time, and that you miss me terribly. Emma   Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emma, Sweet girl thank you for the update you are a wonderful family. Not sure of my dates yet but hope to see mum if I can. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You were caught in dream or spell And wrote of it so very well... The thoughts that came to you in night Begat this poem - it's a delight! Excellent work, Seymour... I enjoyed very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, You are a delight. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
As always, you're a pleasure to read! Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is pure magic, sy It willowed me as if in dream And out the window I did stream A finite on the meadows ground With twilight magic dancing round Something we all need more of... ~ hugs of magicLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you dear Lyra, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! I do believe this one is now my absolute favorite, but it also reminded me of a friend of mine for some reason, so it became extra special. As a matter of fact it not only reminded me of Willow but also you and Isabel, so I will send a big hug your way for this lovely poem. There is nothing means more to me than |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
And butterflies flew round my head Till I did join this joy in wed. interesting. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sharon, you are a love. EagleScorpion Thank you for the read and comment. |
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