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Painted Canvas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Painted Canvas Objects painted with symbols dare And with peripherals of care Illusions gravity of flow That fills your head to make it so. Colored fire to state desire Balanced weight that you admire A flux and flow and ennui That holds the heart and eyes that see. Plays upon your inner stream Flushing out an inner dream Brings together now and then It titillates a harbored yen Confesses you a mortal dare Catches you in nets of care Exposes you magnetically To couple with the things you see. Creates a state of trinity A look into infinity |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Seymour- You, my friend, have painted yet another masterpiece with your words.  You never cease to amaze and impress. I love this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Seymour: This is wonderfully written - great expression in your words! Bravo Bello! Roniece |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, A lovely reply, thank you. Roniece, Thank you for the bravo. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
primo grade AA extra large choice and colors too..dug it sir!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour my dearest friend this is utterly utterly wonderful it flows fluidly over my mind like a clear stream of liquid wonder. Mmmmmm you darling boy are a marvellous writer of truth and light. YOU know I love this, since you never inscribe anything that I don’t utterly love. This again is utterly utterly wonderful, again the perfect penning of my favourite caller of hearts sigh and soul’s thought. Exquisite darling boy utterly utterly exquisite  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Dig your dug. Thanks Marsha, Good morning sweet and thank you for the sweet roll.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, your canvas is always the most beautifully painted...love this one! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Objects painted with symbols dare And with peripherals of care Illusions gravity of flow That fills your head to make it so. Colored fire to state desire Balanced weight that you admire A flux and flow and ennui That holds the heart and eyes that see. ==================================== Brings together now and then It titillates a harbored yen Confesses you a mortal dare Catches you in nets of care ================================ Creates a state of trinity A look into infinity ================================ Well "just drop me in the ocean and paint me blue"  Stinkylove ya make it real hard to pick fave lines...so many of clever word play, internal rhymes and images of waay cool. A flux and flow and ennui That holds the heart and eyes that see. Brings together now and then It titillates a harbored yen now how cool are those thoughts!!  You color my world with Rainbow confetti and rhyme divine.  *winkiewinkie*  You ... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
flux flow ennui titillates - such wonderful word paints you sue on the canvas of poetry - I liked reading this a lot - Paul |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Nothing like a cup of Sy in the morning! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, gotta agree with martie on this one. Can't even pick a fav line, am just gonna go back for a second cup... I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this Sy, one of the best. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantess, Thank you dear. JM, What can I say you always make my day. WWRS Goodknight, Thank you Paul. Martie, Delighted to be of service. Vandana, Thanks. Gentle spirit, What could be better then a second cup? Sandra, Love your comments. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour What a beautiful tapestry you have painted from your magical words. I enjoyed this so very much. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Plays upon your inner stream Flushing out an inner dream Brings together now and then It titillates a harbored yen Another great one, Sy... truly one of "the rages of sages" ~ wise hugsLyra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this brings to mind a picture replete of fire and water and lifting sheets desires and pyres of wants, transpired among two lovers who have conspired |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent word pictures you've painted in this Sy.....nicely done ...especially the last two lines.....cool! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Picasso or whatever your name is... Make sure you clean up the paint smudges from my carpet....after reading this... Nicely painted Sy...the art done well.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I too believe that imagination, emotion, and reason all together paint a lovely trinity of art that you always hold so wonderfully in your painted words! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Delightful comment, thank you. Lyra, Hugs back, Sunshine, Thank you sweet. ethome, Thank you for the cool. Magnus, I promise. Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya PoetFriend Seymour, I came across this poem you've penned and I compliment you sweetie on a fantastic write... I truly enjoyed the read... ThanxNsmiles2u PoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, You can really see that far? I knew you were good. Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah yes...it is truly a canvas alive with color and thought! Love it, as I always do with you! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Thank you friend, almost forgot this one. Larry C, Only if you classify the look. LOL Thanks Sunnyone, |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The pallet of your mind is more impressive than the canvas you paint with your words. paladin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paladin Thanks for the large comp. |
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