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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2002-06-18 07:18 AM

~*Multi-Colored Mist*~

Mary Mary...so contrary...
May I ask of you today-
In your lovely garden fair
Have you seen a muse at play?

My girl has disappeared again
She's wandered on her way
She loves to find new playgrounds
So at home she will not stay

Mary looked up from her planting
And was just about to speak
When the garden hose she was holding
Split open and started to leak

Poor Mary...she was soaking wet
But she simply smiled and said
The tulips will be happy
There's rain in the flower bed

Then suddenly there was a sound
A silver bell was ringing
And there among the cockle shells
The pretty maids were singing

The spray from Mary's garden hose
Played rainbow with the sun
And in the multi-colored mist
Danced a muse who'd found her fun

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2002-06-18 07:21 AM

Now this I like!!! So wonderfully expressed!
Brava Bella! Roniece

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-06-18 08:49 AM

Hey girlie!!!
Welcome back.....seems you found your muse playing in the garden...
Mine took my beach towel and hasnt been seen since summer came in

So good to find your name here on these pages again.

jm

You ...
You are still a whisper on my lips ...
A feeling at my fingertips.

DV

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-06-18 08:53 AM

TrickyVicky~
Do you know how HAPPY this makes me ????
Sending a FLOOD OF *HUGS*
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You KNOW I love it ... as I love you~
So sprinkle me in your poetic showers~
(oh yeah !)
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And ... there's more where these came from~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-18 08:57 AM

LOL@Marge!
This is wonderful Vicky!
Love the way it rolls of the tongue...
even this early in thr morning.
Good write!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2002-06-18 09:21 AM

A lovely poem. I love it.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2002-06-18 09:24 AM

a greeat poem - I am dancing under the sprinkling of the muses - thanks Paul

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-06-18 10:10 AM

enjoy

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2002-06-18 01:11 PM

Hello, hello sweet Vicky pal
I'm glad to see you here again
I knew you would come back some day
But just didn't know when

It's good to read your lines again
They always make me smile you see
I've missed you dearly lovely gal
You get lots of KNUFFELS from me

Now grab that muse of yours and take her home.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

9 posted 2002-06-18 01:15 PM

Not only does poetry take time,
but presentation does, as well...
and my dear Vicky, you presented
this so very, very well...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

10 posted 2002-06-18 02:00 PM

The spray from Mary's garden hose
Played rainbow with the sun
And in the multi-colored mist
Danced a muse who'd found her fun

I just love the playfulness of this one, Vicky and the way you put those colors in...
Spectacular...

~ playful hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2002-06-20 10:57 AM

What a delight this is! *S* I enjoyed it very much.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

12 posted 2002-07-02 08:44 AM

very neat..i like this one...

funny how some little lost muse comes jumping in just when you think surely she must be lost.....she just snuck out to play, eh...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is what happens while we're making other plans..." ;)

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

13 posted 2002-07-03 09:56 AM

What a playful and colorful poem..I enjiyed it

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