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| Open Poetry #21 |
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Anywhere Home |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Anywhere Home Simple reflection in pale drip of morning breathing liquid air just opening drawer of sun, a touch of finger warm to cheek, the feel of kiss on tangled morning hair. Blue afternoon, warm to postman friendly feet, twisting air around a neighborhood with freshly out of school kids of summer. Once I thought to make complete the picket fence you found we’d need a mailbox of wood, hand painted and with certainty, our name. But no, just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write. Hope to read more of yours. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, is anywhere we are about sums it up enjoyed the thought of this one |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my! This is a wonderful loving lazy summer day poem.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You always warm my heart. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I love the sound of this. Joyce |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
That is the perfect place, is it not? Enjoyed this.. Very nice, Martie. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
loner...thank you..and welcome to Passions. DS....yes, indeedy..and thank you, neighbor, for stopping by. Sharon...Thanks, seemed like that kind of day. Sy...Then I am glad! Joyce...Always glad to see you reply. Barry....Yes, it is..I'm glad that you enjoyed this! Vandana--Thank you for your reply. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
But no, just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are. -------------------------------------- Dang Martie! This is just wonderful! You KNOW I love this!! ~Hugs YOU!!~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah the grace and warmth of sweet familiarity.....so nicely conveyed in this....great work Martie!" "just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...hugs back to you, my magic friend. Eric...Thank you, yes..there are some things that work that way. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ God, you're beautiful !!! And your poetry is too !!! 'Simple reflection in pale drip of morning breathing liquid air just opening drawer of sun, a touch of finger warm to cheek, the feel of kiss on tangled morning hair.' Stunning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That's where home is, Martie....you say it as only you can. *still in awe at your skill* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful, your words flow beautifully. Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are. Perfect..perfect place indeed. How I love this. That feels soooo home to me. Gosh..I love how you write. Sincerely, Reg |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...a slipped cotten pale shoulder of me... how delicate... how Martie... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ah Martie, Words woven of fine lace... I am speechless. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You do have a way of making me feel that way. Hugs! Michael--Awwww..thank you, deer! Sandra--So glad to see you here. Regina--I'm pleased that you liked this..quite an honor from a writer such as yourself. Karilea--Thank you, my friend! ThisDiamond--You wrote the perfect few..thanks. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Simple reflection in pale drip of morning breathing liquid air just opening drawer of sun, a touch of finger warm to cheek, the feel of kiss on tangled morning hair. ============================= just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are. ============================= you just took the old cliche.."home is where the heart is"... and dressed it in the warm of a summer morn and gave it a new breath of life in your turn of phrase. Poetry is where your pen is  Something about the morning inspires you in such a special way ( recalling silk lined) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Martie, This is so graceful and beautiful. So serene. You almost make it sound like kids being out of school for the summer is a good thing. LOL. Dawn |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
anywhere we are we share a devoted love anywhere is here Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
just the quiet steady place of you where I am traced through years, a slipped cotton pale shoulder of me with your warm breath there is anywhere that we are. This feels like peaceful loving security, Martie... a beautiful piece...as always.  ~ peaceful hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (06-12-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
is anywhere that we are..... I cant think of a more perfect place to be Martie. Your writing is so expresseful, so beautiful. Hugs. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Once I thought to make complete the picket fence you found we’d need a mailbox of wood, hand painted and with certainty, our name."  (smiles) Oh Martie, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, just the presence, every laugh, every cry, every sigh is all we need to feel right at home and you show this place so very well! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So does this mean that I am home once again??? Sure feels that way when I read one of your works. Excellent phrasing and of course no one takes the simplicity at hand and adds the elegance the way you do in your superb free-verse. Excellent and just what I needed to come back to. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I tried to pick a favorite line, I'd be copying the entire poem... what a delicate painting of peace and contentment and "rightness" with each other. *S* |
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