Open Poetry #21 |
Mine |
Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
I wake from a seed before the damp of morning burns sun dry and curl cold flat to the faded winter floor. I watch today come over the hill, breathe yellow in sequence and I know my fingers now this way, round and right and growing again. My ears gather the thunder of ocean waves, thick mad and running and I mind coil the reason she is so full. Wonder wide with palms pressed where she rises from and we exchange a vibber for a rush, sweet, secret and even though I’m alone in the knowing. [This message has been edited by Alicia (06-17-2002 10:42 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I felt the emotion Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Thank you thank you for the read and feeling. *Peace. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Wonder wide with palms pressed where she rises from" I think that I know. . . excellent my friend. . . peace. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
An excellent write as usual Alicia Have missed reading you Hon. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
bumping this up because I enjoyed it so much that everyone else should.. loved it.. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Awesome Alicia. Good to see you again. Sandra |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I agree totally with the others - powerful emotion here well presented. Paul |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~James, thank you! Sven, for always reading and believing, thank you friend. Maree, have missed reading you! And thank you dear. Temptress, Jenn, thank you, really. And Sandra, it's good to stop in, to see friends like you, to read,thank you. Paul, welcome aboard, and I am pleased you found this to read and for replying with your thoughts. And I'm sorry all, that my replies sound so dry?,...I'm sleepy, so sleepy. You are appreciated. *Peace. . |
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