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Like scattered leaves - a free verse
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Like scattered leaves - a free verse |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Like scattered leaves, my words will flow Am I a poet? I don't know Oh geez I'm not supposed to rhyme Because this verse is meant to be free But will I ever be free, in verse, in life, in mind? Like scattered leaves of roses white Blown off by wind in moments time Like words in mind will disappear the moment they pop up? Will they ever flow my words of rhyme not rhyming like scattered leaves in red like moments in life But will I ever be free? Am I a poet? I don't know My words are scattered and while flowing through my mind I try to rhyme a free verse I try to live a free life I try so hard to keep a free mind I don't know All I know is that,  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) YES, YES, and your gorgeous words always flow so gracefully, as I believe a true poet is always honest and in love with ones heart as you always are! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you ARE a poet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, my dear, are a poet of the first magnitude... so good to see you...we've been missing our Titia! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh Noah, thank you sweet friend, you always know how to flatter a lady  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sunshine, I've missed you too and all others, too many things to do alas. Thanks dear lady. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You scatter them quite nicely and free-verse can rhyme as I understand it but it doesn't have to. Either way......YOU ARE A POETESS for sure and one that presents us with many treasures to read. Well done and I truely enjoyed as I can relate to your thoughts more than you could imagine. Rhyme is in my blood and free-verse just plain makes me nervous. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's all you need to know...just beautiful! |
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