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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2002-08-12 07:29 PM

My heart cried
But no one sees
My soul is sighing
But is it me
I want to say
I want it right
I try and try
With all my might
Without a poem
This was all I had
Nothing got out
When I was sad
My poems now say it
They show my soul
A few who care to read
Are my console

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-08-12 07:33 PM

Goodknight
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2002-08-12 07:46 PM

Paul

A feeling that most poets have...the need to express in words so many pieces of the heart. Enjoyed this!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-08-12 08:45 PM

Paul, as Martie said...this is a feeling that most writers have at one time or another.
A deep need to get it out...onto paper.
Excellent thoughts well penned here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-12 11:02 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Paul, I know just how you feel, I have this bereaved feeling a lot too, for I have no friends in my neighborhood and I always want to feel special here as I love you and so many here so much as friends and just want to be noticed! (sigh) You can count on me for one to always read your gorgeous words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-08-13 01:18 AM

Its the absolute truth, Paul...
beautifully said.

I have found that poetry expresses my very deepest soul.

~ lots of late night hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

6 posted 2002-08-13 02:15 AM

Great expression dear Goodknight... I really liker it... that happened to me too..
enjoyed???
good luck,,

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-08-13 07:15 AM

Same here, Paul. I like this
Sandra

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

8 posted 2002-08-13 05:44 PM

hmm i can understand your feelings... glad you voiced them

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2002-08-13 05:51 PM

And some days what should be on paper, just will not come out. Grrrr....

Wonderful....Hugs, Marti

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-08-13 07:12 PM

Beautiful....Paul, thank you for this....

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-08-13 11:17 PM

Hello Paul

This was absolutely delightful and how well I could relate to your feelings. I feel I am exposing my soul each and every time I put my pen to paper. Thank you for sharing such a special part of yourself with us.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

12 posted 2002-12-31 03:36 AM

I care to read...and know.

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