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mestesa78
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0 posted 2002-08-13 04:05 PM


Feelings thought to be unknown
Unable to be hidden a new love is shown
Quietly growing in a secret garden
Two hearts bloom into one as two others harden
Confused and torn between two worlds
Lovers tendencies become bold
Chances taken without thought
Anxieties and tensions are released
and happiness is brought
A new life to unfold
Obstacles arise and secrets come out from the
closet
Lovers fall deeper and can't stop it
And yet pain strikes the soul when the lovers
are without each other
Unable to control the web that's been spun
Fates plans for a new life have just begun

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1 posted 2002-08-13 07:16 PM


Very beautiful....WELCOME, I know you will love these pages.... hugssss
Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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2 posted 2002-08-13 07:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) I couldn't agree with you more, I feel in love secrets are important to share so then your love can always help you and is willing to can listen and make you feel comfortable! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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