Open Poetry #21 |
Cornhusk Mama |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cornhusk Mama This simple child of golden grain Find her dancing in the rain Her baby bear, a child’s delight Find her dancing in the night Cornhusk mama, sing your song Cornhusk dolly, step along In your quiet, gentle, ways Softly, softly, your skirts sway You nod your head in refrain Simple child of golden grain Cornhusk mama, sing your song Cornhusk dolly, step along Tatted lace beneath your feet Would you smile in gentle greet? Will your skirts in wind blow free? Will you often think of me? Cornhusk mama, sing your song Cornhusk dolly, step along. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
There is a sadness in this joy, and a joy in this sadness. |
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han_tigger Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 50Thundersley, Essex, Uk |
Thr rhyme really adds to the overall effect. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Cute |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here* This is beautiful Karilea... I have seen these dolls made from cornhusks and they are very pretty. I shall keep this piece to enjoy a number of times, I am sure. ~Hugs dear poetess~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I drive through Kansas every summer so I can see my grandparents in Cape Giradeau, Missouri and when we stop by Salina or Hayes or onto Abiliene at those small gift shops I see thes ebeautiful treasures! (sigh) This is adorable and lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I also have seen these Karilea, and sometimes, they are the greatest gift in the world to a small child. Hugs you for this...... somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, this sings perfectly....and makes me want to go fix some corn on the cob..or maybe just popcorn (darn, don't have any!) excellent rhyme and cadence to it!!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I've seen these dolls at craft shows, Karilea... and I have always thought they were cute... I really enjoyed your poem... ~ chipmunk smiling widely and hugging you Lyra |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I love this rhythm. I can see a little kid jumping rope to its rhythm. Thanks, this was sweet. "Cornhusk mamma, take your time We'll be waiting for your next rhyme." SimplyGold |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm so glad I didn't miss this... it's lovely, Sunshine. *S* |
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