Coffee Clutch Java Challenge

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Open Poetry #21

Coffee Clutch Java Challenge

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-08-13 11:34 AM

Coffee Clutch

java java jing jing
sent me on to Sing Sing
cuz I couldn’t do my thing thing
with the jitters in the way

java java jive jive
made me much too alive
that I couldn’t thrive thrive
strumming fingers through the day

©August 13, 2002

and I have another one billowing up toward the brim of my cup

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

mestesa78
Junior Member

since 2002-08-12

Posts 24

1 posted 2002-08-13 11:38 AM

Good idea. Coffee sounds real good right now. Hey this could be the next jingle for a coffee ad..

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2002-08-13 03:11 PM

it's hip! it's cool! it's got da beat!

can we put this in the book? i love it!

we'll include your email address and website address if you want and send you a copy though i'm not sure exactly how long it will be before we get it together.

han_tigger
Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 50
Thundersley, Essex, Uk

3 posted 2002-08-13 03:21 PM

The onomatopoeic jing really conveys what you mean.

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