Open Poetry #21 |
He's Gone |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
She woke up the next day at the usual time after tossing and turning most of the night. She put on her robe then walked down the hall opened his bedroom door not remembering it all. When she saw the bed was made up and empty it all came back the harsh reality. He was gone now to a better place gone but not forgotten she could still see his face. She slowly closed the door as she started to cry through tears she uttered just a whisper, "Good-Bye". WhiteRose In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How sad, yet it sounds as if she was able to move forward after saying goodbye. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So very sad, Anne... I know this feeling well...unfortunately. A very excellent write. ~ sad hugs from a chipmunk Lyra |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
an emotionally charged piece you express loss well Sammie ^i^ |
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