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Orange Essence ... Captured
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Orange Essence ... Captured |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Orange Essence ... Captured Slendered long are the thoughts of silken canvas this night Mirrored on orange essence of galaxies in porcelain delight Traced are the fingers on tips of golden specks between kiss Rising in dwell of hazel reflections beckoning night's bliss Cradled are the arms of inspire wrapped in fantasy release Captured between vacuums caressing each blushing crease Flickers of content arch on petals whispered between sighs Cresting liquid barriers confined to passages of jaded eyes Bonds tendered through swirls of lyrics shared upon script Now hidden in restrained chords of scales no longer tipped Melodies of allure rise with aromatic dance lost in thought Searching confines of pleasure within fogged arias caught Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears Rejoicing in exonerated dreams read within pages of fears Calm are the images bathed in moments of cherished play Residing in the symphony of hearts ... orchestrated this day Mark Christopher Recognize love for the gift it is and not a need that is out of focus. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-19-2002 09:59 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Cradled are the arms of inspire wrapped in fantasy release ...... WOW Mark WOW... I thank you for letting me read such splendid writing... Regards, Sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am still turning this meter over in my mind...and loved the couplets...all strung together--LIKE pearls...and you've got me aching for a sonnet from you--HINT HINT-- I will be back after I linger over this a bit more...I was just admiring the architecture of it here!  |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love the expression and imagery. It was a beautiful poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark "Calm are the images bathed in moments of cherished play Residing in the symphony of hearts ... orchestrated this day" This is a beautiful way to wake up, with this peaceful colored poem of gorgeous. Sort of like floating in warm water.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Slendered long are the thoughts of silken canvas this night Mirrored on orange essence of galaxies in porcelain delight Traced are the fingers on tips of golden specks between kiss Rising in dwell of hazel reflections beckoning night's bliss ================================ Flickers of content arch on petals whispered between sighs Cresting liquid barriers confined to passages of jaded eyes ================================ Now hidden in restrained chords of scales no longer tipped =============================== Searching confines of pleasure within fogged arias caught Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears Rejoicing in exonerated dreams read within pages of fears ================================= So much to see here...far too much to absorb in one read...you've dreamscaped us a portrait that has sound, scent, taste and touch. As we read the words and envision the images, the scent of oranges, petals, and perfumed soap rise up in the steam of this passionate, romantic write. The candles, the music, the bubbles...who wouldnt want to drown in this ones essence. I love the phrasing and vocab in this, but its the imagery and personification that once again showcases your pens gift. Also the tenderness of a moment like this is well captured, the romantic intend and inspire of such a lovely fantasy. I guess Im going to have to find new words to describe and define the pleasures of reading your poetry, because with each write I see new heights being reached... my replies seem so lacking to capture the true beauty of the essence of your poetry. Or perhaps your work just leaves me overwhelmed and dumbfounded...a moth has her limits ya know, even when trying to worship poetry properly Flickers of content arch on petals whispered between sighs Cresting liquid barriers confined to passages of jaded eyes its doesnt get much more lovely than that... Exquisite write MC ... but then I've come to expect that from you.  How she loves me, I dont understand |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well..gosh..I have no words. Yet...I agree with all the above. There really isn't anything splendid that I could say that would..capture what you have written. This is worth much more that a single read on a Saturday night..bath time or not. I'll be back. Sincerely, Reg |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Simply beautiful, Mark. Sandra |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Mark - just a wonderful poem - I enjoyed it so much - Paul |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* Mark, your words taste soooo good, as it caress my mind gently. Think no need to tell you how I liked it eh, 'cause you already knew that right  thanks for sharing dear friend (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Captured, Indeed~ 'Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears' Yes ... the entire piece is beautiful ... but the above line just spoke of something so fragile as to catch this reader in suspended thought~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exceptional use of metaphors Mark! Splendidly presented all the way through. The images dance in your lines and turn over your selected colors through the spectrum of the reader's mind. A real joy to read.... Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears Rejoicing in exonerated dreams read within pages of fears Calm are the images bathed in moments of cherished play Residing in the symphony of hearts ... orchestrated this day" What a beautiful and fitting ending! " |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Poetry is a major turn-on, but yours is exceptionally so...I adored it all, but I'll keep "Flickers of content arch on petals whispered between sighs" as the line that affected me the most...wonderful artistry, Mark. you are admired and rightfully so. aloha, my friend, Cher (CSKpoet) Poetry is: |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, I've read this from top to bottom, and then reversed it; a craftsmen of imagery...you've not lost your touch... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears Rejoicing in exonerated dreams read within pages of fears Calm are the images bathed in moments of cherished play Residing in the symphony of hearts ... orchestrated this day" (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, to be able to always feel that warm afterglow of sweet memories and drink them up like that pina coloda or sherbet you have on the beach is the most comforting feeling of all even on gray days! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
tendered amid believed verses’ purity velvet finds fervent moonlit security held close beneath the sparks of embrace perfect trust descends into this hidden place reverie rapt in such comprehensive hold flourishes within the lines of reality told found quiet among the embers in these eyes time’s worth dances in brilliance beside the sunrise (baby, you are my reverie...I LOVE YOU!!)  I want to wake up to the sound of waves |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Captured......you betcha, from the first words.... Traced are the fingers on tips of golden specks between kiss Rising in dwell of hazel reflections beckoning night's bliss and all I can do is sigh...... Cradled are the arms of inspire wrapped in fantasy release this is about to much, fantasies release....to cool Mark, Inscribed messages prism against the glass of nestled tears Rejoicing in exonerated dreams read within pages of fears Calm are the images bathed in moments of cherished play Residing in the symphony of hearts ... orchestrated this day and then another big long sigh.....and as far as the poem itself....... well you already knew I was gonna say perfect right? But honestly, I mean perfection...flow and meter......thought..... just perfection......flawless..... your writing amazes me......your heart bewilders me. Incredible write Mr Bohanon... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Since all the superlatives have been used... I shall simply say 'thank you', I enjoyed the read more than I can say at this moment. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am in awe of your display of words and how they move so freely and concisely all at the same time~ They are not only captivating but soothing to the eyes. Really nice Mark~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
If words move, then I have just been in a stampede,there! My words weren't quite as pretty as JM's, but you got the idea right WOW!Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir-Thank you kind sir for the WOW and for always bringing smiles. Much appreciated. Serenity-you stand there and admire the architecture all you want and I will stand here and admire you. Thank you much dear lady and look forward to your returns. the_loner_23-Thank you much. I appreciate it. Martie-That is it exactly.....I am elated that you enjoyed waking up to this and anytime I can add peace to your world, you just let me know. Much love to ya. JM-You don't need to worry about ever getting your feelings across. You never leave anyone wondering about any of your thoughts on their works and that is why you are so highly treasure in everybody's eye. That and the sincerity you ALWAYS show. Thank you dearly my bestest friend. Ya know I love ya no matter how mothy you think you are. (BRING a beach towel...we don't supply those here)LOL Regina-Nothing splendid? I believe you just did. However if you wish to return on Saturday night...........I SURE AS HECK ain't stoppin ya! LOL Thank you dear poet, I do appreciate you. Sandra-Thank you much. Means much. Goodknight-If you enjoyed then I am elated. Thank you kind sir. Charisma-If you found them tasty then I am glad they floated your way. Thank you dear one. You know you are appreciated RIGHT? Marge-If one line spoke to you, then that is all I could ask. Thank you dearly. vandana-Thank you immensely. I appreciate your visits. ethome-Your words are always so much appreciated and the time you give to leave your thoughts behind is as well. I appreciate it and you. Thank you friend. VERY much enjoy your visits. Cher-You keep any part of it you wish. You are admired and treasure as well. Thank you for your always kind thoughts. sunshine-Holding it up to the mirror might work......ooops....fogged up AGAIN. Thank you. Knowing that you reread it and reversed it is appreciated. Noah-Hey.......no drinking allowed. LOL Thank you for the glowing words. I am glad you found a verse you like enough to share. Kris-Hey you..........FINISH THAT POEM you just started on my thread and POST it silly. Thanks sweetie. You know you just made me smile don't ya? I love you too and your words are always precious to me. Gentle Spirit-Perfect? If you saw that then I won't argue and that is truely kind of you. I am glad you found it flawless and it amazes you......but "My heart bewilders you?".......hmmmmmm ..... need explanation on that one. Enchantress-A thank you will do it and I thank you in return for sharing it. BluesSerenade-Captivating and soothing will do just fine and I am glad you found them so. Thank you dearly for the kindness you show. Mysteria-A stampede?????? In the tub???????? oh Lordy....now that's an image. LOL Thank you immensely...and your words are pretty enough and are truely appreciated. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
As always, wonderfully captivating. Deb |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perhaps that wasn't a good choice of words Mark. I won't even try to detail that comment now, but lets just suffice it to say that it means it is good to see someone that has such a beautiful heart and isn't afraid to put it to thought...that still doesn't probably make sense......but that's the best I can sum it up. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Deb-Thank you. Captivating is a plus. Gentle Spirit-Was teasing........don't worry.....bewilders me too. LOL Thanks for being so sweet as to come back though and leave such nice thoughts. It is much appreciated. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-20-2002 12:44 PM).] |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I haven't had the chance to be at Passions near as much as I would like to be but I when I get here I am never disapointed when finding one of your poems. Awesome writing Mark Bohanon. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Slendered long are the thoughts of silken canvas this night Mirrored on orange essence of galaxies in porcelain delight Yes...I'm back There are more galaxies here than one poetess could possibly touch upon. You've penned an essence that provokes a wistful eye and passionate spell... You do that so well..I find something more each time I read it. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, what can I say? Nothing that can really describe what I think and feel when I read your words. You are an amazing poet, my friend. Well done, as usual. This one is definitely for the library, as Janet says, it needs more than one read. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
sigheyes-Thank you for compliments. I appreciate them. Regina-Return visits are always appreciated. Glad you are still looking for new things in my poetry. Thank you sincerely. Dee-I can't think of a time when your visits haven't made me smile. Thank you so much my friend and YES.......I got the verse. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
AWESOME!! AWESOME!! Keep counting your blessings |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
mycafe-Thank you for the double awesome in living color. I do appreciate it much. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You have captured such exquisite imagery, in this delightfully romantic piece ... such a lovely flow, my friend ... very much enjoyed! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark~ you just have that gentle way about you.....really good to see you back and posting on a regular basis.....cute little tiger there too..... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (07-22-2002 03:45 PM).] |
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thejingler Junior Member
since 2002-07-21
Posts 15NC |
“Slendered long are the thoughts of silken canvas this night” The poor, simple mind of the jingler is not able to fathom the deep words of wisdom spoken by Mark, thy fellow poet. I beg your kind indulgence. Please email the jingler and explain so that I too may be uplifted and share the joy. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kit-If you say the imagery and flow is to your liking then I am jumping for joy. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. Greeneyes-Hey there.....so glad to see you as well. She is cute ain't she? Thank you dearly ... your visits are always a treat for me. thejingler-I have chosen to be VERY private in a Very small circle of friends thus no email being posted but fear not.......no email neccessary as the beautiful thing about poetry is the open interpretation from one reader to the next. I will let you know a couple to get you started to where "I" wrote it from and you may take it from there. "Slendered long" - simply legs thus leading us to the "Silken Canvas" being the skin. Hope that helps but don't be shy about taking it to what "YOU" see in the words. Thank you much and welcome to Passions. |
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cjohnson/poet2079 Junior Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 35va(757) |
I sit in AWE of such magnificent beauty of words! You inspire me. Thank you for your warm and tender welcoming comments. :butterfly: eyssence |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Summer keeps me away, but I am so glad I got to read this as the last poem in Forum #21, what a wonderful way to close a forum by capturing it in orange essence. With each poem you write I wonder can he top that, and somehow you always manage to succeed, and not disappoint us. Simply stunning piece. I pass this way but once, here's hoping I meet you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Bonds tendered through swirls of lyrics shared upon script Thats what its all about, Mark.... Isn't it? Thats why we're here... I really enjoyed this piece  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
eyssence-If you were left in awe and insprired then I am humbley honored. I thank you much. Mysteria-Such a lovely reply you left and I thank you sincerely. I will always try to out do the last post. That's what learning is all about. Lyra-That is it exactly! Thank you so much for you kindness. I do so appreciate you. |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
Slendered long are the thoughts of silken canvas this night Mirrored on orange essence of galaxies in porcelain delight Traced are the fingers on tips of golden specks between kiss Rising in dwell of hazel reflections beckoning night's bliss so much I could quote, this oozes the gift of expression, at its best!! so enjoyed this beautful read Sammie ^i^ |
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