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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-08-13 06:01 AM




tomorrow I am wind in wheelbarrows
I have round feet with grooves
that mark the sand
and push wax paper leaves
into little hands on doll arm trees

I was with the sun at dawn time
when he brought pink sky sheets
to be laundry in the sea
and left the white cap suds
on bottoms of sail boat children

shall I come over tonight
with my stars and moon cloth
and decorate your isamine woman
with a new cricket sound dress
will you walk by the river mirrors

and take me for rides in your auburn


©Dark



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rwood
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Tennessee
1 posted 2002-08-13 07:39 AM


Color sky without a dry moment
My eyes are glass streaked
in the warmest red of day
raining for the bluest part of night.


You inspire such that I don't have a name for anymore.

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-08-13 07:44 AM


regina;

thanks hon, hope it makes warm places in your smile.  that place you describe
is jello and laughter.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-08-13 07:58 AM


DC,
Well if she didn't accept she missed a good time.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-08-13 08:58 AM


Amazing...simply amazing.
~slow morning hugs D~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-08-13 09:01 AM



I am never sure
if you are the poem
and it writes you,
or if you are the imagination
that rides the wind...

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2002-08-13 09:05 AM


Sy, thanks my friend, I appreciate you.


Enchantress, real slow hugs to you too, thanks for your eye touch here.


Sunshine..lol, thanks to you sweet coffee cup of greeting..the wind does it to me..could write a hundred time about the wind and where it takes my mind.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
7 posted 2002-08-13 09:27 AM


mmmmmmmm..another dark and lovely. Enjoyed.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
8 posted 2002-08-13 10:09 AM


another delicious poem.amazing ussage of word combos... good smile day to you ....Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-08-13 10:16 AM


ms rose, slooooow hugs to you  and thanks for that whisper.


CSK, day is better now thanks to your touch, I appreciate the review ms.

Martie
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10 posted 2002-08-13 10:22 AM


Dear DS

Where did you find the wind in this sultry morning sky?  

You mix words until they make their own, I think.

[This message has been edited by Martie (08-13-2002 10:38 AM).]

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-08-13 10:45 AM


ms martie....

was wind moving the trees there or superman was changing clothes again..thanks lil neighbor, does my word blender keep you awake when I fire it up outside?

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
12 posted 2002-08-13 07:24 PM



shall I come over tonight
with my stars and moon cloth
and decorate your isamine woman
with a new cricket sound dress
will you walk by the river mirrors

and take me for rides in your auburn

================

Very seldom do I say I wished I had written that but the above brings it to mind now.  The whole piece well done and I would hope she said yes.  Much enjoyed.

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In Your Poetic Mind
13 posted 2002-08-13 07:25 PM


Yes, and bring that bike...I could use a good ride in the country...   
Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Mistletoe Angel
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14 posted 2002-08-13 07:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I bet this must be the perfect place to have a tea party or a picnic, this is lovely, your imagination always paints colors in the wind, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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