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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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tomorrow I am wind in wheelbarrows I have round feet with grooves that mark the sand and push wax paper leaves into little hands on doll arm trees I was with the sun at dawn time when he brought pink sky sheets to be laundry in the sea and left the white cap suds on bottoms of sail boat children shall I come over tonight with my stars and moon cloth and decorate your isamine woman with a new cricket sound dress will you walk by the river mirrors and take me for rides in your auburn ©Dark |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Color sky without a dry moment My eyes are glass streaked in the warmest red of day raining for the bluest part of night. You inspire such that I don't have a name for anymore. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina; thanks hon, hope it makes warm places in your smile. that place you describe is jello and laughter. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DC, Well if she didn't accept she missed a good time. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing...simply amazing.  ~slow morning hugs D~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am never sure if you are the poem and it writes you, or if you are the imagination that rides the wind... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thanks my friend, I appreciate you. Enchantress, real slow hugs to you too, thanks for your eye touch here. Sunshine..lol, thanks to you sweet coffee cup of greeting..the wind does it to me..could write a hundred time about the wind and where it takes my mind. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
mmmmmmmm..another dark and lovely. Enjoyed. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
another delicious poem.amazing ussage of word combos... good smile day to you ....Cher Poetry is: |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms rose, slooooow hugs to you and thanks for that whisper. CSK, day is better now thanks to your touch, I appreciate the review ms. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear DS Where did you find the wind in this sultry morning sky? You mix words until they make their own, I think. [This message has been edited by Martie (08-13-2002 10:38 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie.... was wind moving the trees there or superman was changing clothes again..thanks lil neighbor, does my word blender keep you awake when I fire it up outside? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
shall I come over tonight with my stars and moon cloth and decorate your isamine woman with a new cricket sound dress will you walk by the river mirrors and take me for rides in your auburn ================ Very seldom do I say I wished I had written that but the above brings it to mind now. The whole piece well done and I would hope she said yes. Much enjoyed. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Yes, and bring that bike...I could use a good ride in the country...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I bet this must be the perfect place to have a tea party or a picnic, this is lovely, your imagination always paints colors in the wind, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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