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( The memories )
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( The memories ) |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
The days are running so fast .. Day after day Running so fast like the lightning.. Every day single day carries with him a beautiful memory that we can't forget… How we shared the times with the people who we loved and respected… The friend that we had met in the high school… Sharing the school life together.. Laughing… helping each other… The remaining memories.. In our heart…. our mind.. Every part in our life that indicate on the memory.. Wishing that these beautiful events comes again and knocked my door…. Start living these events again like before we did… It’s hard to forget the memories… specially that one who belong to you… People all over the world should know that……… The human possible moment his death comes to him……… And possible rose her fragrant smell ends…….. Hand writing possible vanishes or removes…… The sparrow possible he stops the singing…. ….. But ….. You have to know that our memories will never end and forgotten…. Coz she drilled in our mind and our sentiment………. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
secretlife, interesting concept, the last two lines were different from the rest and sort of completed the thought. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I got kind of lost here and there, are there some words missing,i.e. in the indented section just before the end? or is my brain missing in the way that an engine misses...skipping cycles that help the motor run in a way that makes sense. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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