Where Are The Stars I Once Wished Upon?

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Open Poetry #21

Where Are The Stars I Once Wished Upon?

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-12 08:11 PM

It seemed like only yesterday
When you found the key to my heart
You and I became inseparable
For nothing could keep us apart

But our light of love has dimmed
And my blue skies have turned grey
The sun moved behind the clouds
On the day you went away

Many nights we once spent together
Searching for our guiding light
As the moon shone like a beacon
We wished upon our star so bright

But those nights are now a memory
For you have faded far from view
But I recall with much fondness
All the times spent loving you

You were the star in my constellation
My treasure beneath the sea
Part of me will always love you
For you once meant the world to me

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

1 posted 2002-08-12 08:17 PM

Sue!!!! That's gorgeous! Loaded with appealing metaphors and thoughts.
Very nicely done, Amiga!

Smiling jeff

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-12 10:57 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, and may you always swish upon those stars as many more great delights await your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-08-13 11:51 AM

The stars are there my friend - perhaps hidden behind a temporary cloud cover.

In our hearts there is always room for more than one kind of love.

Hugs, Marti

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-08-13 05:02 PM

Sue: I'm glad to know that you are not really lost and lonely, as this poem implies! Good writing!

Betty Lou Hebert

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