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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-12 06:47 PM




If I were to come
bringing my heart
broken in my hand
the tears still wet
and hot on my cheeks,
would you hold me
lift me up
take me away
as I grow weak?

I could sustain
all that I am
on whatever
you are willing
to give.
On your love
your passionfire
I could
forever live.

WhiteRose

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-12-2002 10:09 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-12 11:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, such gorgeous passion fuels your words, may love always take you away to paradise, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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