Open Poetry #21 |
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Some One Else's Star |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA ![]() |
![]() For so long I've been wishing, on some one else's star. One already taken, so my wishes wouldn't reach that far. A brilliant light glowing from a distance, was what caught my eye. I knew it would last my life time, not knowing I'd have to say goodbye. I should have known, that any star, that stood out from the rest. Would be taken by someone, that would want only the best. Someone else's star, will never shine for me. So I'll withhold my wishes. I'll just have to let it be. But each night, I look up, at the star that shines so bright. Though it belongs to some one else, It still fills me with it's light! I'll not choose another star, if this one can't be mine. I will not wish, but I'll let it's light, fill my heart and mind. If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! [This message has been edited by Kitty** (08-12-2002 10:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I will let this little gem sparkle for me, the rest of my day... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kitty~ 'I'll not choose another star, if this one can't be mine. I will not wish, but I'll let it's light, fill my heart and mind.' This is such a lovely thought~ Enjoyed your poem very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Sunshine, Marge.... Thanks for your response! Was deep in thought and this came to mind! And It's oh so true! Glad you enjoyed. Kitty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kitty this was a truly delightful read. Well written. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do hope that one day...there is a star there, shining JUST for you... Very pretty poem, lotsa hope within.... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Kitty, I am very sure there is a very special star for you to wish upon up above and all your dreams will come true! (sigh) This is just beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kitty, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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