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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-06-16 06:15 PM

Say Hello,
again
& let the timber
of your quiet-deep
resonate, stimulate
& sweetly ache
the feminine of me

Open your arms,
again
crush my softness
against your warmth
'til the world disappears,
erases the tears,
bridging all the years,
of longing

as we
slip into one
gloriously aware
that it all begun
because of a simple
"hello..."

~Tier
6/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-06-16 07:13 PM

This read very nicely, of course, what I got from this may be totally different from the reality in which it was penned. (That's a whole other cans o' worms).
I've always had trouble sorting out these remembered emotional impressions, you do this fine.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2002-06-16 07:21 PM

as we
slip into one
gloriously aware
that it all begun
because of a simple
"hello..."

Isn’t it amazing what can come from such a simple beginning? I remember a hello like this…and the dance continues in beautiful harmony. A lovely piece as always Tier.

Everything is possible in the game of life
(Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-06-16 07:25 PM

I really love this one, Tier

as we
slip into one
gloriously aware
that it all begun
because of a simple
"hello..."

Isn't it amazing!

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-06-16 09:44 PM

Wranx, I'm always interested in how others percieve what I've written. Thank you for your kind comment...

Thank you, Tracey, you're such a sweetheart. No wonder somebunny loves you! *wink*

Madame Chipmunk, being in love looks great on you too! *hugs* thanks for your kind comments!

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-06-17 01:37 AM

as we
slip into one
gloriously aware
that it all begun
because of a simple
"hello..."

Ok fine, I picked out the same verse she did but I ain't no bunny!! Ok, maybe a stud bunny! LOL
Loved this, Tier.
---the dumb blonde

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

[This message has been edited by Duncan (06-17-2002 01:45 PM).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-06-17 03:27 PM

what an opening line Tier!! wow. . .

and the rest of it just takes that and runs the race. . .

great work. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-06-17 03:55 PM

One word spoken and heard...
bringing into force the most awesome and
wonderful moments and feelings..

You have captured this very well..Thanx..

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-06-17 04:57 PM

Some hello's are anticipated and desired...James

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