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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
0 posted 2002-08-12 10:01 AM


I wonder are you afraid
of loving me too much
I don't think that could happen
we don't ever touch.

I wonder are you leary
of giving too much
again I kind of doubt it
we don't ever touch.

I wonder are you scared
of being hurt too much
that's impossible considering
we don't ever touch.

I wonder about you
and all the things you fear
that kept you from touching me
all these years.

WhiteRose

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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
1 posted 2002-08-13 03:31 PM

some questions dont have answers
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-08-13 03:32 PM

Sounds like respect to me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
mestesa78
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since 2002-08-12
Posts 24
3 posted 2002-08-13 04:00 PM

I am saddened, cause I have been there before
To some a touch means more than words itself
han_tigger
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since 2002-08-10
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Thundersley, Essex, Uk
4 posted 2002-08-13 04:05 PM

I like the repetition you use, it works very well.
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